love story with so lovely end...i hope it happen to me!!!!don't you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
By mado2angel1
@mado2angel1 (45)
Italy
March 29, 2011 4:04pm CST
hey hadn't spoken to each other since that night,that night two years ago,
time had passed, they'd gotten older and wiser,but the love was still there,
you could see it in both their eyes , it was raining,they were standing under shelter together, catching up,asking each other how their life has been,
"good" they both said,but the truth is they were both miserable without each other.she hadn't known the truth of that night,the truth of why he ended it, she had to know,it had been eating away at her for so long."why did you leave"she asked."i had too"he replied,but that was not good enough.she took a deep breath and walked out into the rain ,he ran after her and grabbed her ,now you want to come after me?
i waited two years for you to come back,and you didn't," she yelled.we were young and i was foolish,i didn't know how to treat you,every single day i'd find a new way to hurt you.i didn't want to do that to you anymore,i loved you and i still do love you. did you think it was easy for me to put you through that?i am supposed to protect you from anyone hurting you,and i couldn't even protect you from myself.i needed to grow up and i have," he said.he took her in his arms,and kissed her?
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6 responses
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
30 Mar 11
hello,
Nice story,but how did it end?
Did they ended up to each other's arms once more?
I always love,love stories that has a happy anding.
And of course,i surely wanted to have my lovestory a happy ending
have a good day and welcome to mylot
@toniganzon (72517)
• Philippines
30 Mar 11
Very sad, i could just have imagined the pain the girl went through when the man abandoned her with no reason at all. She waited and it took two years. They both love each other but due to certain circumstances they can't be together at that time. He should have somehow let her know that before he left. Yes, he didn't want her to feel the pain and yet, he caused her so much pain. He's lucky that after two years, she's still there waiting and still loves her so.
@starsailover (7829)
• Mexico
30 Mar 11
Hi mado 2 angel: I like this story. It was so sweet. Does it make part of a book? In case you write it, go on girl because the story sounds really interesting. I think that the boy didn't kiss her at this moment but this was the beginning of their new love story.
ALVARO
@xien2xien (1382)
• Philippines
30 Mar 11
i honestly don't get the story, you named it as a love story with lovely ending, but when i read the story it's full of miseries and pain for both parts? what's so lovely about being left behind and being hurt? i honestly don't get it i'm really sorry..
@deadfieldy (131)
•
30 Mar 11
Wow very romantic indeed but its too short. hahah
The rain definitely add the value of romance in the story..
You wish that it will happen to you? hmm be prepared for the years that you will get hurt..=)