Un-Said Word Remaining Part

Pakistan
April 4, 2011 10:13am CST
Well she came to the shop with the same lady and now i realized that she must be her mother.She was in the shop but she didn't see my yet and i was so scared and senseless .She did her whole shopping without seeing me and i was worried what if she gone and wouldn't even know i was there.??As she was going out of the shop she stopped by my counter and she still couldn't imagine me standing right in front of her as she didn't see me but she was looking at some handbags i though i was wearing a cap that's why she didn't recognize me but at a sudden when she chosen a handbag and looked at me for asking the price,she seemed to be stunned and she was forgot what she was going to say.....I don't know why she dropped the handbag and gone out in hurry and as she got out of the shop she stopped for a while and looked at me, there were tears in my eyes and she did notice 'em... January 14, 2007 What i am doing, i should let her know how much i love her and for how long and why i moved back..only for her.I tried to make a lots of plan to expose my hidden love..each plan seemed to be odd and boring and i was trying to figure this out how to tell her eventually.One day she came again and at that day i was %100 ready to let those four words come up i was totally prepared to say "i love you" she was searching for her stuff to shop and i was standing with full confidence and was waiting for her to come to my counter....As she came to me and before i could say " i love you", she asked for a wedding ring.I got her some rings to select and i thought while she chose a ring i should say "i love her" and this time i wasn't nerves but again before i exposed my love to her, she said "please help me wearing this ring if it's fit to my finger.Ah! it was a greatest moment of my entire life when i touched her hand and i was wearing her a wedding ring and i thought it was the right moment to say " i love her" and i won't be having this kind of golden chance again to express my feelings.I was holding her hand and when the ring came closer to her finger, i tried to say "i love you" But she spoke first " I am going to get married tonight" Alas!! i had the wedding ring and i was holding her hand but she was going to get married to someone else.....I heard something broken into my body and that was might be "heart" All i said to her ever was, """OH Well congratulations""" --------------------------------------The End--------------------------------------
1 response
@albto_568 (1268)
• Costa Rica
4 Apr 11
Nice story, though a little sad, with a bitter end, I´d say rather than happy, it reminded me White Nights, of Dostoievski, the guy with hidden love, and her, ending with someone else. I hope it is fictious, and you are not the guy who ended choosing the ring.lol
• Pakistan
5 Apr 11
Hey Albto,It's a real story of my incomplete love with a worst ending and i suggested her a wedding ring with a violet color diamond and she got married with someone else and i also attended her wedding ceremony and i was watching her going away from my life with some one else and there at her wedding and when she was sitting in the groom' car, every one was clapping with joy but i was only one person who was trying to stop my tears.And i can't forget her last look when she looked at me and smiled with full of tears in her eye but her tears wasn't for me but for her parents who was going to say her daughter good bye.....
@albto_568 (1268)
• Costa Rica
5 Apr 11
I am sorry, pal, I had no idea it was a true story, I hope you have left all this hurting things behind and move on with your life. And even, find someone else to give your heart, only, this time, take your chances and speak your heart, What´s the worst it could be?, she telling no, but, at least, you tried. Wish you luck and success.
• Pakistan
5 Apr 11
Yes life is still going on as it never stopped but everything seems to be different and boring i can't forget her and her smile and those days of my craziness for her when she comes to my shop and i used to stare at her face while hiding myself behind my counter.Ah! i ain't gonna forget that and in fact that was my life and it's over now, i am not spending my life anymore but my life is now spending me....!! I had one more big change in my life when i got married 2 years ago with a girl who's totally not my type of, Love is looks like, no more in my life and it's not gonna comeback to me either.I have only one phrase wondering in my mind every time when i am alone and that is "I should have told her earlier"...!