I want to dedicate this poem to my friends in our school magazine

Pakistan
April 9, 2011 11:42am CST
tell me if its good.....I wasnt to surprise them =D The Beauty of Friendship (dedicated to my best friends Iqra,Shafia and Nafisa) The bond of true friendship Never weathers away Try as you might,it never bends nor ends No matter what you say They'll stay with you through rain or sunshine Eating away your money,wasting your time Always pushing you past the line And making you feel sublime When your broke,with not even a house Downcast and sad They drag you to their place and announce 'Yours staying here understand!' Lets cheer to Friendship with a can of Pespi Hey why are you guys getting all tipsy? I wrote it myself so please take out the mistakes
1 response
• Philippines
10 Apr 11
It's nice...That's is a free verse poem but you managed to do some rhyming and it sounds good...I love writing compositions, too and I'm planning to join a prestigious literary contest this year.
• Pakistan
10 Apr 11
no way! I'm no poet....I prefer writing stories.This is the first time I've actually tried=P Good luck for the competition and thanks for the response^^