Inner Piece

@waflay (2737)
Nairobi, Kenya
June 28, 2011 6:16am CST
Hi, how do you feel about this magic art that reside within poetry?. I always feel it within my mind and in my inner soul, I have come to realize there is nothing written that has 'that touching effect' to the author other than poetry. I always love its flow, its message and the mood portrait by the author...it can be simple but educative, can be short but emotional and can be long but interesting. Lazy Mind: Staring on my keyboard, Having nothing to write, I can see I'm being left behind, ....With no clue as how I'm gonna start, Can I bunch in the keys to make a word? I have no answer... Maybe you. MY mind is set, but I'm reluctant to make a move, Oops! my day has just passed on. Second day comes along, The story repeats itself, With none to lay a foundation, ...Just me, Search.., search...and search. I have found it. OMG..this is amazing, The community that cares about lazy minds ...mentors who give without limit, I love Mylot.. Always be Mylotter..
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@zax340 (86)
• India
24 Jul 11
Nice words linked together to give good feeling. Liked your poetry.
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@waflay (2737)
• Nairobi, Kenya
24 Jul 11
Hi, poetry is my daily life... this is the only thing I can do when my mind is no at rest. Sometimes it warms my heart and relieves my mind from my daily worries. So cool, thanks for your commend.
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• Guam
29 Jun 11
I suck at poetry obviously in the mmeantime... If you want real poetry go to www.tlig.org. Poetry like no other. I promise. All i can say is have an open heart, not an open mind.
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@waflay (2737)
• Nairobi, Kenya
29 Jun 11
All I can say is "THANK YOU", its as if you have just opened an new door into new world.... I like you first poetic commend, really uplifting.
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@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
2 Nov 12
hi waflay nice poetry . Life is what you make it , give a little and take a little, leave the rut you make, be real and not fake . sometimes we learn , we listen to the music, the spheres are humming, something good is coming. okay really clumsy and needs some work but I love to play around.
• Guam
29 Jun 11
Helping others is not a waste. You are rushing life, post haste. "The past is history, the future is a mystery, today is a gift, that's why it's called a present" A present I say but from who, presents are on a two way street. A benefactor and the originator. Tossed and pushed by the waves of the world, there is a place where we can turn for after becoming a loathsome worm.. It has a name that is Holy and True. He is near to those who desire to be cool. He is the Alpha and Omega, the King beyond despair. He comforts those who are willing to share, their burdens, their cares, their hopes, and despairs. My Lord and My God is there for you; He has given me much. I am much obliged to distribute and share. Peace and Happiness stream through my soul, all because of His Presence, His Light of Repair. I pray for you oh lazy mind that you turn to the Lord of Repair. He will fill you sluggish spirit of now to a fervent spirit, who desires to care. I don't know who you are but I know that God wants me to tell you He loves. If what I say is untrue, may God punch me and throw me in the zoo.
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