"Numb" An original poem by nightarchangel.

Philippines
July 29, 2011 10:19pm CST
It has been ages since I posted poems, now I'm inspired again and I'd like to share this work which just appeared in my mind as I type. Hope you all appreciate. Early mornings looked no brighter day When happiness just had to go away To you I bid goodbye that day Yet you never seemed to care any way Giving all my love seemed wasted Smiles in secret now harbor hatred Trying so hard to let you know It hurts real bad to just let go Hoping for the times we used to be True colors of you which I now see Thought I'd see a rainbow after the rain Yet you never came and stop this pain Wasting emotions sounds like nothing Love left behind now had me crying Thinking why should I keep this feeling Wishing that I could have never been caring.
1 response
@tears08 (161)
30 Jul 11
ouch! what a sad poem, but when you are in love there are things you cannot avoid and one of it is to get hurt..yes it will be very hard at first but still life has to go on, we have to move on. Nice poem
• Philippines
30 Jul 11
Thank you very much, tears08, for appreciating this poem. You're right, we all have to move on, even if it hurts deep inside. I need to improve my grammar though :)
@tears08 (161)
30 Jul 11
my high school teacher before told me there is no wrong grammar in writing poems as long as you are able to express your feelings.. hehe your profile picture makes me hungry