A day with Jaiho
By Jane
@jaiho2009 (39141)
Philippines
August 17, 2011 6:25am CST
When I am with YOU
My morning starts to shine with your smile.
A cup of tea, a slice of bread, that matched your sweet caress and warm embrace.
You seasoned my breakfast with tender kiss full of love and grace.
My break time comes with sunshine in your eyes.
A glass of juice and a slice of my favorite pie,
Served with love, filled with care and loving touch.
Here comes my lunch arrived with gladness, garnished with kisses.
A bit of jokes to lighten up my stressful time loaded with works.
We dine a meal with candle light like the first time when we’re together.
And now my night would end with one wish in my mind,
That my day will always start, like each day when I am with you.
And love will bind us on earth as it is in heaven above.
Each day with you becomes a Valentines without flowers and chocolates,
Each day with you, is a season of love with no dancing in the moonlight.
Each day with you becomes special with no occasion, but worth a celebration.
Each day with you I believed my life is complete,
Coz’ you gave me the meaning of my life, and it’s all begun, when I am with you.
When you found someone you believed, you’re life will surely becomes complete.
This is how my day begins- with the one who gives me inspiration to write and find my old self back, with my passion.
have a good day everyone
jaiho®
8/17/2011 7:23pm PT (Wednesday)
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12 responses
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
17 Aug 11
dear saphy,
It's complete from breakfast to dinner - I will include midnight snack next time
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
18 Aug 11
dear sis,
Thanks a lot for the praises my sis...
Yes, I do love to write..so much,it's my passion
have a good day always
sis,
jaiho®
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
20 Aug 11
dear sis,
I've been writing since I was 16 yrs old and been working with a publishing company where I also studied Fine Arts in Illustration.
You can always try to write poem in English, just few lines will do
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@dpk262006 (58678)
• Delhi, India
18 Aug 11
Hi Jai!
Beautifully beautifully written. It is so touching and so sweet that I read it twice. It says all above love and care and how one feels when one is cared and pampered. . I wish that you each day could begin with a joy and smile on your face.
@dpk262006 (58678)
• Delhi, India
18 Aug 11
You deserve all the appreciation for your work.
DPK
PS - Am happy to see a smiling face on your avatar (thanks).
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
18 Aug 11
hello dpk,
I know you are one of those friend/s who will never missed to appreciate my work/s.
Thanks a lot for your support and have a good day
jaiho®
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
18 Aug 11
thanks again...
I guess no need to frown,and make my day down
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
yes dear, days are the same and same with moods.
sometimes we can easily compose a poem, sometimes it seems so hard :)
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
18 Aug 11
hello swirlz,
Yes, I did write this poem and other poems from this interest (jaiho)
I use to write long time ago, and now someone did give me inspiration to write again.
Thanks for your appreciation and have a good day
jaiho®
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@myfb2009 (8296)
• Malaysia
18 Aug 11
Very impressive and romantic poem, my dear sister...It is really great if we can have these kinds of loving meals everyday in our life. It really makes my day sounds meaningful and interesting. Hope can see more interesting poem from you again. Keep thinking and create more delicious poems...
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
18 Aug 11
dear sis,
oh yes, what a wonderful meal everyday like this
I will try to write more and express my feelings and emotions while sharing it with you, my friends and other mylotters.
have a good day sis
jaiho®
@bhabycatch013 (9150)
• Philippines
19 Aug 11
hi jaiho,
What about our midnight snack? at the river side?
Eating kwek kwek at the street for the first time
Do you still remember the most hated food you ate pallak?
Another inspiring work of yours
In love eh? hahaha
miss yah!
@bhabycatch013 (9150)
• Philippines
19 Aug 11
Later my meeting will start in 20 minutes just printing some presentation
I will be home around 11:30 pm hope no one will gonna drag me for so called BOD night out
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
17 Aug 11
dear sids
I wish to see you in person in this life my dear brother.
di,
jaiho®
@Professor2010 (20162)
• India
18 Aug 11
Another beautiful poem Jai betaMay I know the 'one who gives you inspiration to write'?
You said in another poem about 3 guys, is he one of them?
Best of luck, blessings from Dada, on his birthday.
Professor
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
18 Aug 11
hello dada,
Thanks a lot for your appreciation papa.
3 men...I am referring to only one man in that poem dada...
Hugs to you and maa
@visavis (5934)
• Philippines
17 Aug 11
What a good day if we start the day like what in your peom.
I wish I can in my daily life here in abroad
but the imposible is always there because my partner is far away.
May be you are right inspiration would be the key
For our daily life begins with smile.
I'll try to answer also by peom but I don't know if possible.
What do you think my response?
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
17 Aug 11
hello friend,
As long as you respond and post your comment...it's fine with me.
No need to write in a poetic way
good day my friend
jaiho®
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
20 Aug 11
oh no problem my friend..
You try to compose one and send it to me for any revision
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
18 Aug 11
hello simplyD,
Thanks a lot for the appreciation and I am sure you also feel the same with the one you love...as I've read on your topics how loving you are to him,and he is so lucky to have a loving wife like you
have a good day my dear
jaiho®
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
18 Aug 11
hello sjvg,
Thanks for reading my poems and sharing your thought.
I wish to write more and share it here with friends and mylotters .
have a good day
jaiho®
@vkatrix (78)
• India
17 Aug 11
Hi jaiho :)
You write such expressive, and beautifully worded poems!! Your words paint a peaceful picture full of warmth and content.
In this particular poem, the way the edibles and non-edibles have merged is picturesque indeed ;)
It's splendid how they have intertwined with such apparent ease and with a rhythm that is, logically speaking, not even sensible :D
You have surely done a great job!! :)
Keep writing... It's inspiring to see such love-filled lines get created in a heart and come out on paper.
Good day to you too!! :))
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
17 Aug 11
hello vkatrix,
And thanks once again for your encouraging words, I am sure everyone's giving me good reason to keep on writing
have a good day
jaiho®