I decided to stay and write my poem/s- " a WOMAN SHE is"
By Jane
@jaiho2009 (39141)
Philippines
August 23, 2011 2:48am CST
dear mylotters and friends,
Last week I started a poem of "Farewell", but the theme is not to leave mylot.
But still it made my friends worry ,again I want to say sorry guys.
Yes- I admit, I tried to bid goodbye thru that poem.
I was not active for days ,thu I participated and was online here in mylot, but not my usual routine.
I came to realization- NO- I will not leave mylot and will keep writing my poem.
And here is my come back poem for everyone.
" A Woman She is"
She is every house's foundation,
Without her...a home would never been the same,
She is every man's heart...without her,
a man could be at lost.
Give her sorrow, and she will show you happiness,
Bring to her your troubles, and she will give you peace.
She is a great listener, without her nobody will hear your cries,
She is a good adviser, she found good in everything.
She is a mother, without her there'll be no children.
Give her thorns and she'll find roses,
Give her direction and she'll find the road.
Give her sand and she'll find the sea.
Give her darkness and she knows where to find the light,
Give her rain and she'll find the rainbow.
Give her doubts and she'll chase your fears away.
She knows when to cry and when to smile,
She knows when to start and when to stop.
She knows when to lie and when to tell truth,
She claims yet she denies.
coz...she always find a reason in every life.
a mother
a wife
a lover
a friend
a sister
….a woman she is……….
Have a good day everyone
jaiho®
8/23/2011 3:46pm PT (Tuesday)
2 people like this
11 responses
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
23 Aug 11
Jai!
You must continue to write poems because you are a talented and gifted poetess. This was again a wonderful and very meaningful poem by you. I loved it.
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
23 Aug 11
You see I love good poetry and sometimes I too attempt to write a poem, therefore, you can say I am a connoisseur of good poems.
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
You don't have to say the word...it reflects each time you give me compliments
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
hello dpk,
I know you will always have these kind words for me
@bhabycatch013 (9150)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
hi jaiho,
It is good that you changed your mind
This one is really nice I love it
I am proud to be a WOMAN
miss yah
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
miss yah always
Just having a break from simulation job
can we have a drink after my shift...hahaha
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
uh uh....have a rest then,remember, you have no right to get sick
@bhabycatch013 (9150)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
not now
it's raining hard here I will not stay for a long time here
I am not feeling well for past few days
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@mobhomeir (7558)
• Philippines
31 Aug 11
Hello my dear and ever beloved friend, one of the reason why I strived hard to come back here is you, i miss everything about you...and here's another talent of yours that you've been hiding it..i never knew your a poetic...keep it up my dear...Nice day ahead and my regards to your family circle...
Mobhomeir here..
I miss you a lot
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
31 Aug 11
hello Martin,
Missed you too my dear...and where have you been?(~_~)
I hope you will find time to visit more often,I miss your topic and having inter-action with you...
This is unexpected, but you are never forgotten my dear...hope you are fine always.
take care
jaiho®
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
1 Sep 11
@ CHN,
Thanks a wish to see you active here in mylot
jaiho®
@myfb2009 (8296)
• Malaysia
24 Aug 11
Too busy and excited makes my mind go blank, that's why i arrive here late. Hope sis Jai will forgive me... Very nice and interesting poem, sis Jai. Indeed being a woman is great. Since from child until we entered our adulthood, we can transformed our self and fit into the many roles of our life. No wonder, there are always stories that i had came across saying, a home is not complete without a woman.
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
25 Aug 11
hello sis,
You are never too late my dear
Yes, a home is not a home without a mother
have a good day
sis,
jaiho®
@prudhvimech (98)
• India
23 Aug 11
Wow Jaiho2009 I really should Jai ho for you. Because you explained the importance of women in this poem very well. I recommend my mother and sister to read it also. They too loved it much. So, I would like to congratulate you on that. Keep up the good work and hope you will write more like these poems as well.
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
hello prudh,
Thanks for your appreciation.
Give my thanks to your mom and sister as well for liking this one.
I do, I will write more of this kind and have a good day always
jaiho®
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
@ mask,
thanks for the compliments and hope to see you posting your response again.
and welcome to mylot
jaiho®
@visavis (5934)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
Now you are serious of making and sharing your thought through poem which you are very good. You make this poem a career, my suggestion is after you posted here put it in a soft copy in your file then later on put it in a good hard or soft bound file and make it a booklet or collections.
Keep it up for showing the importance and your hidden talent.
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
hello friend,
I am always serious when it comes to my writing.
It reflects me, and my feelings.
have a good day
jaiho®
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
24 Aug 11
Wow. You really write good poems. Do you ever submit them anywhere? I think it can be printed in a a newspaper or magazine.
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
24 Aug 11
hello secret,
Thank you for liking this one.
Yes, all my poem/s are submitted to other sites that also pays.
I wish to have a compilation of all my poem and have those printed one day
have a good day alway my friend
jaiho®
@jazel_juan (15746)
• Philippines
24 Aug 11
wow nice one jai. i really could not write such.. i used to write poems way back in high school..but lost my touch in it. So nice, i believe it is all about a "woman" and what a woman can do. very nice.
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
24 Aug 11
hello jazel,
You can always try my dear.
It's been a long time since I lost my interest with writing.
Till someone gives me inspiration to write and try my passion again.
Thanks for the appreciation and have a good day always
jaiho®
@starsailover (7829)
• Mexico
29 Aug 11
Hi jaiho: Wow thanks girl for sharing such an amazing poem. It0s simply fantastic and I think that it has a very important message. It's a really good one and it makes me remember about the amazing job that women around me has made and how much I should appreciate them, specially my mum and her unconditional love.
ALVARO
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
31 Aug 11
hello Alvaro,
Thanks also for the appreciation my dear friend.
I know you will surely understand about these great qualities of a woman, as you love your mom.
Thanks also for your comment and have a good day always
jaiho®
@Professor2010 (20162)
• India
23 Aug 11
Jai beta
Thanks for sharing another wonderful poem.
Yes women is ALL IN ONE
Best of luck.
Blessings
Professor
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@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
hello dada,
Maa is one of those special woman..give my hugs and kisses to her
@jaiho2009 (39141)
• Philippines
23 Aug 11
hello vkatrix,
Thanks a lot, I am really inspired each time I read compliments from dear mylotters
And, if I am giving inspiration to everyone...it's giving me encouragement to write more
have a good day always
jaiho®