A composition written by me

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Hello, dear mylotters, this is a composition written by me, could you help me to find out the faults in it, including those in grammer, or give me some advices. Thanks a lot! It is a weekend again. Now I think I should write something about this week, on one hand to make a short summary of this week, and on the other to have a practising on my written English. In this week I meet some problems. The first is from my job. I mainly did my experiments in the library on my workday, but some of them did not go very well as I expected and I tried my best to solve them through various ways, that do not made me feel good. I think the main job for me in the coming week is to find out the reasons of the bad results of my experiments. The second problem that I am facing is about my way of coping with other people aroud me. People always say that suitable words and action could help you with your success in career. I agree that very much, because some of my improper language and behavor always give offence to others, which made me in a bad situation. For me the most thing is to be modest and to learn more from others. In this weekend, three of my friends, including one who had been going on errend in Taizhou for nearly four monthes, and I had a boating in the summer palace. All of us think boating is a very intresting sport, and we enjoy ourselves there. Now I am planing to have a trip to Yanqing.