A Love Letter (send this for me)
By ckayth
@ckayth (103)
Philippines
November 12, 2011 11:47pm CST
When I heard your heartbreak, I wanted to be a tape
so I can bring back the pieces of your heart in shape.
When I heard your dreams, I wanted to be your Fairy-God mother
so I can grant all your wishes and make them come true.
When I see you sad, I wanted to be your best friend so I can cheer you up.
When I heard you're mad at your sister because she did not take side on you
I wanted to be your partner so I can fight for you.
When I heard you had fights with your mom,i wanted to
make you my mom's only son-in-law 'cause i know she'll
gonna love you for sure.
When I heard your Father left you, I wanted you to be the father
of my children--our children. 'cause I know you'll never leave us.
And when I heard my heart's beating for you,
I wanna say at the alter "I Do"
I wanna marry you for my heart has and always will
beat for you.
But..
My heart is broken before I give it to you.
I started to cry just before I smile.
And I have given up before I start fighting for us.
If it's not in this lifetime will we be together,
maybe in the next. Love will make us meet at the
CROSSROADS again and when that day comes,
PROMISE I am never letting go.
Love,
Kayth
4 responses
@phillyguy (3005)
• Philippines
13 Nov 11
Hi kayth! Do you really wrote this poem? it's really good you should send this to that guy you are talking about and I'm sure he would freakin' love it. Bad news I believe this lovely post of yours will be deleted later on because it is just a letter/poem and not a "topic for discussion" you should at least add some questions for our fellow mylotters like whether the poem is good or "what do you think the guy's reaction will be" or something like that. But I hope mylot spare this one because your poem is really good.
@phillyguy (3005)
• Philippines
13 Nov 11
Yeah I can see that you are new in mylot. Thanks for the best response too bad if mylot will delete it. Maybe you can post it again adding something that will make it more like a discussion topic. Have fun mylotting
@ehleonkyrietales (452)
• Philippines
13 Nov 11
Phillyguy. I quite have the idea whoever that "guy" is. Yes. Her writings are one of a kind.
@ehleonkyrietales (452)
• Philippines
13 Nov 11
Your poem portrays so much of your life - the emotions, the story and message. You are a good Writer. Especially with poetry.
@ehleonkyrietales (452)
• Philippines
14 Nov 11
How is it that you really want this man? What's in him that you couldn't find from somebody else? I mean, there's always someone better right? I don't think this MAN is really worthy of you. You're beautiful and kind and from the looks of it intelligent, you should find yourself another if HE doesn't value you at all. Don't waste your time with him.
@dabangladehi (660)
• Bangladesh
13 Nov 11
Hi ckayth
welcome to mylot.
What a sweet and preety love letter you got! Its so nice and full of love. It seems that your boy friend so romantic and he loves you a lot.Do you give reply of this sweet letter?
Cheers
@bewitchingmelody (366)
• Philippines
14 Nov 11
Nice poem. I feel your pain. I hope MyLot won't erase it because I like the poem. The guy is fortunate to have someone like you but I think you deserve someone better than him. Btw, welcome to Mylot. I'm also new here. Hope you enjoy your stay. Happy Mylotting and GOD BLESS you ^_^
