let me be............

@ritzz07 (788)
India
January 29, 2012 12:42pm CST
dear like this poem by JOHN GREY and so i am sharing this with you if some likes this can discuss about the poem i will be very happy...... "LET ME BE A LITTLE KINDER. LET ME BE A LITTLE BLINDER TO THE FAULTS OF THOSE ABOUT ME. LET ME PRAISE A LITTLE MORE. LET ME BE, WHEN I AM WEARY JUST A LITTLE BIT MORE CHEERY...... LET ME BE A LITTLE MEEKER WITH THE BROTHER WHO IS WEAKER, LET ME STRIVE A LITTLE HARDER TO BE ALL THAT I SHOULD BE... LET ME BE MORE UNDERSTANDING AND A LITTLE LES DEMANDING. LET ME BE THE SORT OF FRIEND THAT YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN TO ME... i know you all will like this so... thank you have a great day!!!!!!
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JER616
@JER616 (545)
• Philippines
30 Jan 12
I could have liked the poem except for the use of word "like" and "more". 1. We should not be a little kind but be more or always be kind --- Galatians 6:10 2. We should not be a little blinder to the faults of those about us but we should be more or always. --- 1 Corinthians 13:5 3. We should not be a little meeker with the brother who is weaker but more or always --- 1 Thessalonians 5:14; Romans 15:1
deodavid
@deodavid (4150)
• Philippines
30 Jan 12
hey there ritz, Wow nice poem, did you make it, it really symbolizes ( for me) a person trying to change to be a better person than who he was and trying to resolve his inner demons, it is very moving and i like it a lot.
anniepa
@anniepa (27955)
• United States
29 Jan 12
It's beautiful and I like it a LOT! Those are great words to live by. Annie
celticeagle
@celticeagle (166976)
• Boise, Idaho
30 Jan 12
Isn't he the one that wrote the book about Venus and Mars and men and women? Can't think of the name. I know I could be alittle more cheery. I am a good friend and loyal. My sister friend will tell anyone that. I have known her for fourty plus years. That's a long time.
blue65packer
@blue65packer (11826)
• United States
30 Jan 12
A very nice poem! I wish I had the talent to write poetry and books! I have all this stuff in my head but I can't get it out and put it on paper! Anyway thanks for sharing the poem!
msh2207
@msh2207 (51)
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29 Jan 12
hi ritzz i know, you have a huge collection of good poems this is one of them i read it when you were showing me your collection and even i love this poem.........this is really a good work of poet...used very simple words and creation is beautiful.....thank you for such a good poem sharing with us here on mylot........