help! opinions needed :)
@helyahitsagnes (2)
May 27, 2012 3:13pm CST
Wrote this rap song and I really need your opinion
here it goes..
Yo all you hates
All the critics and the fakers
I've got something to tell you all
Never ever fall
You are great you know
But why are you putting yourself down low
You keep on putting people down
Making them frown
What's up with you?
Why are you doing this boo?
You know you got better things to do
You are great you know
But why are you putting yourself down low
Making them cry
Will never ever make you happy
If it does then you are crazy
Better go to a sanctuary
It is ready for you baby
You are great you know but why are you putting yourself down low ;)
DONE! so what you think?
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