First, second and third person narrative
By Porcospino
@Porcospino (31366)
Denmark
June 6, 2012 4:16pm CST
Most of the novels I have read use the first-person perspective or the third-person perspective. I like the first-person perspective, because I find it easier to emphasize with the character and because I think it makes the story more interesting. Of course there are some limitations about the first-person perspective, and the narrator is only able to describe things from their own point of view.
Some years ago I read a story that was written from the second-person perspective. Instead of using "I" or "(s)he" the author wrote "you". It was a story about a girl that gradually became blind and because of the way that the story was written it felt like it was happening to me. It was a different experience to read that kind of story, but I found it interesting.
Do you prefer the first-person perspective or the third-person perspective when you read a novel? Or do you like both? Why? Have you read any novels where the author used the second person-perspective? Did you like or dislike that?
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@prashsweet15 (91)
• India
8 Jun 12
most of the novels that I,veread have been written in the first person and I find it interesting , Ifind myself moving along with the characters ,sometimes Iam on another planet,in another time period .third person perspective novels are also fullfilling ,but the second person perspective novels must be scary , can,t imagine myself being blind , orbeing murdered etc ,etc .
@Porcospino (31366)
• Denmark
11 Jun 12
It is true that books written in the second perspective can be scary and you experience the story in a different way when it is written like that. Sometimes that is the exact purpose of the story. I remember one short story that I read. It was about a person (you) who hears some strange noises late at night and gets scared. The authors desribes how you checks the apartment and tries to relax while you get more and more scared In the last sentence you discover you aren't alone in the apartment and the story ends. I think that the story is really well written and very scary.
@rog0322 (2829)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
7 Jun 12
Hi:
I still has to come upon a second person narrative type of story. I prefer the third person or the "omnipotent" mode where the reader is taken just about anywhere in the story. Its perspective is unlimited while the second person style is a bit awkward in the way the story unfolds.
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@Porcospino (31366)
• Denmark
8 Jun 12
I think that the first person perspective makes it is easier to understand the main character's feelings and thoughts and that is one of the reasons why I like that writing style, but it does have certain limitations. In a story that is written in the third person, the author is able to write about things that the main character doesn't experience directly or things that he or she doesn't know.
I don't have much experience with second person narratives. I have only read one novel that was written that way and I liked that one. I think that it is challenge to write the entire story that way. I have never tried that. I suddenly remember a short story that I read. It was written in second person as well, and it was extremely well written. It was a person (you) that discovers that there is a burglar in the house and it is the burglar that "talks" to reader, but we doesn't discover that till we read the last sentence.
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@allyoftherain (7208)
• United States
7 Jun 12
I also like first-person narratives because I feel that I connect to the character better. I'll read third-person and like them just fine, but first-person novels always seem to strike me more. I've only read a few books in second person, and I must say that I never liked them very much. I was struck by how awkward they were and how the character (who was referred to as 'you' as though he/she was me) was just acting so unlike me. So I would say that I sort of dislike the second-person narrative, but maybe I've just never met a novel written in second person that could make a connection with me.
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@Porcospino (31366)
• Denmark
8 Jun 12
I feel the same way about first-person narratives. I think it easier to understand the character and their thoughts when the story is written from the first-persson perspective, and somehow it makes the story more interesting. I also read third-person narratives and I enjoy them, too, but I like first-person narratives the most. As far as I remember I have only read one book that was written in second person, so I can't say that I have a lot of experience with them. I enjoyed the book that I read. It was story about a girl that gradually become blind. I don't have any personal experience with that, but I found it interesting to read about her experiences and her denial.
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@allyoftherain (7208)
• United States
8 Jun 12
A lot of the old choose your own adventure books I used to read were written in second person. I never really felt like I was experiencing the story firsthand like the narrative style is supposed to make you feel, probably because the characters described were never much like me and would do things and act in ways I wouldn't.
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@PageTurner (2825)
• United States
6 Jun 12
Hello Porcospino
Like you, I have not read many 2nd-person narratives, but the few I have read have been interesting. I enjoyed the perspective as well as the challenges the author may have experienced in this sort of writing.
I also prefer first and third-person perspectives. Some novels I have read include both of these perspectives within the same novel. I find this interesting, as it allows me to feel like I know some characters better than others, and I find myself taking sides. But it's also just fun to read and reconstruct while I'm reading and thinking of my own writing styles.
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@Porcospino (31366)
• Denmark
7 Jun 12
I think that it must be a challenge to write a second person narrative. I haven't tried it myself, when I write I only use the first person perspective or the third person perspective. It could be interesting to experiment and try to write a second person narrative. I don't think that I have read a book like the one you described where the author used a combination of both perspectives, but it sounds interesting.
@PageTurner (2825)
• United States
7 Jun 12
I was very surprised when I realized what the author was doing, and I was impressed that they were able to pull it off. I wish I could remember the books so I could recommend them.
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@ChandraNalaar (76)
• United States
7 Jun 12
Growing up, I much preferred 3rd person perspectives, because I didn't like having somebody else's voice in my head. I liked being able to become everybody I read, while still reading about and empathizing with other characters and actions in the story. Now, though, I've become able to read 1st person just as easily, because I've learned that I can have their voice in my head and still be able to see other character's points of view...I guess that means that my ability to understand people has matured?
As for 2nd person, I've only read a scant handful of novels written like that, but I've read many, many fanfictions in that perspective. Sometimes it's done well, sometimes it's not, but when it's done well it's usually done really well and is extremely powerful. I've also written some stories myself in that perspective.
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@Porcospino (31366)
• Denmark
11 Jun 12
It is interesting to hear that you have changed like that and that you find it easy to read first person today. I always liked first person narratives, because I find it easier to understand the main character that way and I read many person person novels when I was a child. I also read novels written in third person perspective, and I enjoy them as well, but I prefer books written in first person.
My experience with stories in second person is limited. I have read one book that was written that way and it was really wellwritten. It was a story about a girl that gradually became blind and she was in denial. She gradually experienced more and more problems, but she didn't want to accept the truth. It was a very good book, and the author made it seem like it was happening to the reader because of the way that the book was written.
@Reg1881 (92)
• Hungary
11 Jul 12
When I started reading (a looong time ago) I only read third person narratives and I liked them. Laurell K. Hamilton's books were the first ones I read with the first person and I loved it. Reading in first-person makes me feel like I'm the heroine and it's great! Since then I read first and third and the mixture of the two as well. But I never heard of the second person before. It sounds weird, but I think I'll give it a try. Can you suggest something for me to read in second person? Maybe crime or supernatural if you know some :)
@Porcospino (31366)
• Denmark
11 Jul 12
I have only read one book in that was written in the second person. The author's name is Edith Ranum and the book is called "Men du kan ikke flygte" which means "But you can't escape" I am not sure if it has been translated to English. The genre is not crime or supernatural, it is a realistic story about a girl who gradually becomes blind and doesn't want to accept the truth. I haven't heard about second person narratives in the crime or supernatural genres, but maybe another mylotter would be able to recommend some books from those genres. I would be a interested in reading more books written in the second person. I think that is would be interesting to read something different from most of the other books that I read.
@patgalca (18365)
• Orangeville, Ontario
7 Jun 12
First person does limit you to only what the narrator sees and feels. Third person can involve all characters' perspectives. I just finished reading Jodi Picoult's "Lone Wolf" which takes an interesting twist on the narrative. Each chapter is first person of a different character. For example, chapter one is called Luke and is written in first person from his perspective; second chapter is Edward written first person from his perspective. The story continues on this way with several different characters. What is really unique is that each character's narrative used a different type font as if the actual characters were typing their stories using their own font. It certainly made the story easy to follow.
I prefer to write in third person. When told my story was too short another author asked if I had a subplot. I am now working on that subplot. I cannot have a subplot if I wrote in first person because the narrator would not be in every scene. It is hard to write a full novel in first person, though many authors have done it and done it well.
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@Porcospino (31366)
• Denmark
8 Jun 12
"Lone Wolf" sounds like an interesting book. I like the idea of a different first person narrator in each chapter. That way you get many different perspectives and I think that it one of the things that make a book interesting. I have a read a Danish book that was written the same way. I liked the writing style a lot. The topic of the book was a tragic incident that happened and each narrator gave us some hints, but they didn't reveal what actually happened. Unfortunately the ending of the book was a disappointment. The more I read the more curious I got and I was looking forward to finding the truth in the last chapters, but the author never revealed the truth.
Yes, when we write in first person a subplot wouldn't be possible, because the narrator has to be part of everything when we write in the first person. I like first person narratives, because I find it easier to understand the main character that way, but that kind of writing does have some limitations. I have only written short stories so far and I have never tried to write a novel in the first person, but could be an interesting challenge.
@PoppaDave (438)
• United States
6 Jun 12
I do not read many novels, but when I do, I prefer first person.
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@Porcospino (31366)
• Denmark
7 Jun 12
I also prefer first person. I read third person narratives as well, but I usually find first person narratives more interesting.
@adee28 (32)
• Philippines
7 Jun 12
I like reading first person narrative - you get to know everything that goes in the character's head. Third person narratives are also interesting. Sometimes the author can make jokes through it, the likes of Tolstoy, Dostoevsky... etc. The third person narrator can make something funny while describing his/her character or a situation in the story.
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@Porcospino (31366)
• Denmark
7 Jun 12
That is true, when we read first person narratives we get to know the character's thoughts, and I think that it is one of the reasons why I find them more interesting. I think the story feels more like a personal story and it is eaiser to understand and emphasize with the main character. On the other hand it is also possible to write great stories from the third perspective. One of the last novels that I read was a novel by a Danish author. The author had chosen a third person narrative, but she was still able to desribe the main character's thoughts and feelings really well and I really enjoyed the book.