Is this proper grammer?
By coffeebreak
@coffeebreak (17798)
United States
July 8, 2012 11:54am CST
I hear all the time, people saying the phrase..."these ones" instead of "this one" or just "these" "all of these". For example... if someone has a couple things in their hands are want to know the price of only certain ones.. they say " how much are these ones?". I was just watching a quilting tutorial and she was showing 4 different ways to do a stitch and she then picked them all up and said "These ones are more difficult for a beginner".
So I have always thought it was not proper grammer, but it is always said and lately I have not heard that it isn't. I know things have gotten very lax and ordinary in the world today and I know with texting...the english language has become nothing but abbreviated everything, but I still would like to know...
Is "these ones" proper grammer?
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10 responses
@smacksman (6053)
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8 Jul 12
You are correct. It is not good grammer. Much better to just say 'these' as a group or 'this one' to be precise.
It is a very common fault to add extra words that are not required.
@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
10 Jul 12
I thought "these" was the better way too, but like Owlwings says above...functinally vs. grammatically. I hear "these ones" on TV all the time lately...not to mention hearing people use it daily. It just seems so common these days...
@smacksman (6053)
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10 Jul 12
Interesting different useage.
In Queens english, ones means my.
ie. One talks about ones clothes
or, translated into American english -
I talk about my clothes
@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
10 Jul 12
I thought something looked odd when I spelled it, but was to hot to work on it! Gets really hot here in my computer room and this was my last work for the day before I melted away. Thank you for pointing that out. IT will be one of those things...that now.. I will never forget!
@owlwings (43910)
• Cambridge, England
8 Jul 12
'This' is singular; 'these' is plural. 'This one' means 'just this single thing that I am indicating'; 'these ones' means 'these [several] things' (showing or pointing to a number of objects). Both are entirely correct grammar.
The use of 'one' or 'ones' merely emphasises the fact that the objects are individual. In that usage, it is not a 'counting' term but is 'one' as distinct from 'the other' (or 'ones' as distinct from 'the others').
While we are about it, it is appropriate to point out that 'grammar' is spelled with an 'a'!
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@owlwings (43910)
• Cambridge, England
10 Jul 12
As many here have instinctively felt, "one" or "ones" in this context may often appear to be superfluous (and therefore functionally redundant), however that doesn't mean that it's grammatically (or syntactically) incorrect. In fact, spoken English often uses redundancy and repetitive constructions to emphasise and particularise an idea. It is also used for reasons of rhythm and to avoid sounds which jar or sound bad together.
Compare these two (both grammatically and syntactically correct) sentences:
"I would like these, please."
"I would like these ones, please."
In the first, the sounds of 'these' and 'please' coming together sound harsh and many speakers would instinctively prefer the second because it separates the similar sounds with a word which is, semantically, redundant but, nevertheless, has a definite function. We can't say that either is more 'correct' because both follow accepted rules of grammar and syntax.
There is far more to correct English than just grammar and syntax. We use the language correctly even when we introduce semantic redundancy. The study of this kind of usage is called 'pragmatics'.
I feel that those people who believe that it is 'wrong' or 'incorrect' to say 'these ones' are missing something very essential and potent about language - that it is intended to convey ideas and that, in order to do that effectively, especially in speech, it is often necessary to use duplication and redundancy to match the rhythm of the listener's thought process.
Our natural attention to the meaning of what we hear spoken (and also to what we read) has something of a 'wave structure' or a rhythm. An expert speaker exploits this (and some even do it consciously), even in quite short utterances, by making sure that the 'key' ideas coincide with the attentive highs in a rhythmic 'awareness cycle'. Much of the art of good speaking - and of good conversation - lies in being aware of this rhythm, achieving synchronisation in the audience and then placing the 'key' points of an argument on the peaks of the cycle.
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@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
10 Jul 12
Yeah, someone already told me about my mispelling! It gets so hot in my computer room, this was the final action of the day and it didn't "feel" right when I typed it, but I was to hot to change it!
But "these ones"...isn't the "ones" redundant...."I want these" and point to the ones out of the many that you want?
@danishcanadian (28953)
• Canada
8 Jul 12
In this case "ones" is a pronoun, assuming that the person being asked, understands to what the asker refers.
Example: How much are these needles, threats, and buttons?
How much are these ones? (gesturing towards the desired supplies)
Or the person is in a shop looking at some varieties of apples. Are these green ones (or just these ones) here the same price as those red ones (or those ones) over there?
Sounds proper to me.
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@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
10 Jul 12
I hear it so much...I just thought it was redundant (I think that is the word!) because "these" (or "those") is adequate on its own in a case as you mention..."ones" is not needed to make the point. But...I hear it so much.
@drannhh (15219)
• United States
8 Jul 12
Since the very purpose of grammar is to make things more clear and understandable, and since the phrase "these ones" is vague, it is not good usage. The trend now, however, is to allow anything to stand that gets the point across somehow. Therefore, if I were doing the tutorial I would absolutely not say "these ones," but on the other hand, I would not think bad thoughts about someone else to did. It is a less offensive than a lot of other "mistrakes" people make.
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@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
10 Jul 12
I only was asking as I hear it so much these days on TV. For people to just be saying it...it could just be because "where they are from" or slang or something like that..but for it to be scripted in a TV show...someone has to write it and tell them to say it, so I thought maybe I was missing something. I think it is okay to say, just probably redundant as "these" says it by itself...doesn't need "ones" added to it, but no biggie if it is. With all the texting abbreviations going on these days...like they say "OMG" instead of "Oh my gosh" (or another word for gosh!) I was just wondering if I was missing something. People aren't not speaking much these days..it is all texting and slang and all. And true, that one isn't as bad as many other options!
@MischiefFilledMe (268)
• United States
8 Jul 12
The proper grammar for that particular situation (someone has a couple things in their hands and want to know the price of only certain ones...) would be "How much are these?" not "How much are these ONES." The reason is, there is more than one object being asked about. If it is a singular object "How much is this one?" is okay because there is only one of them.
In the world today, people have gotten much lazier with the way they talk. Texting and computer-based conversation aren't helping.
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@MischiefFilledMe (268)
• United States
8 Jul 12
By the way, props from the Queen of the Grammar Nazis for asking that question. Nobody's really interested in proper grammar these days. I'm always glad to answer grammar and spelling questions though. =D
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@owlwings (43910)
• Cambridge, England
8 Jul 12
'Ones' is a perfectly correct plural meaning 'individual articles'.
If I ask "How much are these?", I am usually asking the price for the whole bunch together (unless they are exactly similar objects, in which case it is usually understood that I am asking about the price each).
By using "ones" I am merely emphasising that I am talking about 'this particular collection as opposed to the "others"'.
There are certainly times when 'ones' is redundant but then it is functionally incorrect rather than grammatically incorrect!
@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
10 Jul 12
MischiefFilledMe - I know.. people are so busy texting and abbriviating words these days that they don't know how to speak the language properly anymore. And from what I saw recently with my 12 year old grand daughter and what she was taught in school so far....there isn't much grammer taught in schools these days either!
Owlwings... that is how I was looking at it. Having a handful of items and asking the price for only a few of them if you dont want all of them. Functionally vs. grammatically...good way to put it! Hadn't thought about it that way.
@AmbiePam (92474)
• United States
9 Jul 12
I would have said how much are these? I would not have added the 'ones' to the end of the sentence. When it comes to grammar, what I've noticed most of all is people using loose when they mean lose, or the other way around. That grammar mistake I see all the time on mylot.
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@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
10 Jul 12
Yeah, I think it is just redundant but no big deal. At least they are speaking extra instead of not enough..like with texting...words are partially spelled and often partially spoken! I have just been hearing this so often lately.
@sarahruthbeth22 (43143)
• United States
8 Jul 12
No, using those is better grammar. Those in your hand are the ones I want. That is better grammar. The problem is many don't learn " proper" English so they use the English they hear. Granted the way us Americans use English is different And Should be different. But the main rules Should remain the same.
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@sarahruthbeth22 (43143)
• United States
10 Jul 12
No , it would be those in your hands and these in my hands. Think of it this way. Yu use these for the ones that are close to you, like in your own hands. And you use those for the ones that are farther away like in another's hands.
@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
10 Jul 12
How about "these in your hand are the ones I want"...pointing to just half of all that are in your hand or just the red ones and not the green ones (figuretively speaking, and I know that is spelled wrong, but nothing I do fixes it)
I was involved in my 12 year old grand daughters education ... and she hardly ever came home with any english/language homework other than spelling words. I just don't think they teach it much as they used to and plus...with today's texting and abbreviation of words thereof...kids are learning it all wrong. My daughter works for the police department..and is a texting queen...and she told me a bit ago that she was writting up reports one day and after about 5 of them, it suddenly hit her...she was abbreviating words as she does when she texts and didn't even realize it! She had to rewrite all those reports and then from there on...really "force" herself to pay closer attention when she did reports!!
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@himzey (1321)
• India
8 Jul 12
Well I can't comment on someone's grammar cause mine is very poor. In many countries with English as secondary language, you'll find a completely different scenario. Here the people try to translate the local phrases into English and the results are some of the funniest phrases you might ever come across.
"Don't talk in front of my back.."
"Both three of you get out.."
and so on..
So an appropriate response from my side would be ".. I ain't got no clue.."
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@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
10 Jul 12
Oh yeah...languages being translated can have those issues...simply cause of the translating. I have heard "couple of three or so" and "a day or three"... those, from what I recollect...come from the western era (in the USA). It just seems that lately I have been hearing that so much.. in person it isn't really an issue as language is not taught so much in schools these days like it was when I went to school, but in watching TV.. it seems to be in the shows/scripts so often.
@FrugalMommy (1438)
• United States
8 Jul 12
No, it isn't proper. "These ones" is redundant because both "these" and "ones" are standing in for the same noun. It's better to just say "these" instead.
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@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
10 Jul 12
That's what I was thinking. But I hear "these ones" so often..even on TV which is scripted...they are told to say that. It just made me wonder if I was missing something.