My favorite poem I wrote

Philippines
July 19, 2012 12:01am CST
Day Dreaming I wake up in the morning There is a light coming from the window Beautiful little birds flying on the trees Saying good byes to my sweet dreams I wish those dreams will last for long But I am going to bed Trying to figure out things And flashing back memories Trying to sleep again And made a day dreaming -yokorobi12-
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3 responses
hsofyan
@hsofyan (3446)
• Jakarta, Indonesia
19 Jul 12
Nice poems / poetry.. is simple, but meaningful. Thanks for sharing ...
imAbigael
@imAbigael (475)
• Philippines
19 Jul 12
Thank you so much for appreciation. :)
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hsofyan
@hsofyan (3446)
• Jakarta, Indonesia
25 Jul 12
You're welcome ...
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bent31
@bent31 (85)
• Canada
22 Jul 12
Very nice. Simplicity at it's best! :) I sometimes get caught daydreaming and then be woken up by reality. Great poem, keep up the good work!
imAbigael
@imAbigael (475)
• Philippines
22 Jul 12
Thank you so much :)
skyandgrassplot
@skyandgrassplot (1497)
• China
19 Jul 12
lol,this poem is very interesting,but the content may be is a little simple. But,life is simple,isn't it? From this poem I can see that you have a very peace life,I'm very admire you cause I'm busy everyday and just ignore the beautiful thing by my side,sometimes the pressure will make you feel everything is boring,so may be I should learn this from you,and begin to have a peace life.
imAbigael
@imAbigael (475)
• Philippines
19 Jul 12
Thank you too for appreciation. I hope you really like it, and made this poem as an inspiration. Have a peaceful life! :)