My poems

@hsofyan (3446)
Jakarta, Indonesia
July 19, 2012 1:45am CST
Togetherness is gone (husband and wife dialogue) My wife, Stop cleaning the house Please come here To accompany me My husband, The house is dirty We aren't able to pay the maid You've already retired My wife, Don't cook It's a holiday Let us eat outside the home My husband, Don't eat outdoors We need efficient You've already retired My wife, Let's keep me company Why the rush to sleep It's still early My husband, I have to get up early To clean the house And prepare breakfast My wife, I have to go this morning My friends were waiting Long we don't meet My husband, Be careful on the road Greetings for your friends But, why not breakfast? My wife, You have fallen asleep last night I see you sleeping soundly all I don't have the heart to wake you My husband, I'm sorry I don't welcome you home But, why should sleep on the sofa? My wife, I have to go again I have social activities With my old friends My husband, Don't forget dinner at home You look very dapper Although not wear perfume My wife, sorry, we were very busy I had dinner with friends Happy dinner, dear My husband, I woke up too early But you're not at home Where are you? My wife, I came home at midnight I have to go early in the morning I don't have the heart to wake you My husband, I just finished washing clothes I've found the clothes that you wear today But, why the smell of perfume?
4 responses
• Philippines
19 Jul 12
I like your poem. I heard this kind of conversation from my married friend. Anyway, you did a great job!
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@hsofyan (3446)
• Jakarta, Indonesia
19 Jul 12
Yes, we often hear the conversation of the couple. Thank you, Chasecalice. Thanks for your attention.
• Philippines
19 Jul 12
My pleasure..:)
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@imAbigael (475)
• Philippines
19 Jul 12
I like it, very open minded and maybe it really happens on a real relationship and this is one of an examples of having a husband and wife.
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@hsofyan (3446)
• Jakarta, Indonesia
20 Jul 12
Be careful, do not imitate!
@Zhizho (1350)
• Indonesia
19 Jul 12
Hi mr.Hsofyan. I like your poem. We know, it is story that happened often. But I got the real messege there. As young couple it can be a lesson. I did not mean that I blame a wife but it is true like in the story. Sometimes as a wife, they (i don't want to call it "us" eventhough I am a wife from my husband surely. LOL ) does not aware about it. They ignore about how they wear cloth front of their husband or spend much time to take care houshold and no time for their husband as your story at the poem. thx mr hsofyan.
@hsofyan (3446)
• Jakarta, Indonesia
20 Jul 12
Yes ... yes ... yes ... You know, men are looking for a friend, but intimate .... instead of looking for a housemaid.
@ranger07 (555)
19 Jul 12
I enjoyed your poem. Good job!
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@hsofyan (3446)
• Jakarta, Indonesia
19 Jul 12
Thank you, Ranger! You know the story in this poem?