An original poem/song by me.

@bent31 (85)
Canada
July 21, 2012 8:09pm CST
I usually start to write a poem when I'm inspired. I dedicated this one to my crush way back. This was originally done with a (rap) beat. Simplicity over complexity, Many gaze upon your national beauty, Imaginations play with the mind, Many possibilities my courage has declined, The sun so bright, the good, the light Shining at her extraordinary sight, Midst in the white sand, water ripples Perfect complexion, shining crystals One in a million, cupid shot an arrow Love struck, easy shot, like shooting fish in a barrel, First star I see at night, wishing for a miracle just waiting for daylight.
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3 responses
@litvillegas (1274)
• Philippines
24 Jul 12
Hello Bent31.Nice poem. You have a wonderful talent. I'm sure if your crush know about this composition she will surely love this.,,:)
@bent31 (85)
• Canada
24 Jul 12
Thank you very much litvillegas! Have a nice day :).
• Philippines
24 Jul 12
You're welcome.. Hope you can enhance more your talent. It is indeed a blessing from God. Keep it up...Looking forward for your next composition,,,:)
@hsofyan (3446)
• Jakarta, Indonesia
25 Jul 12
Nice poem. I wait for your next poem, with great ideas.
@bent31 (85)
• Canada
25 Jul 12
Thank you sir hsofyan. Have a great day!
• Philippines
22 Jul 12
This is a good one... I really appreciate young kids who knows how to express their feelings... Keep it up and good luck!
@bent31 (85)
• Canada
22 Jul 12
Thank you very much! Kind regards.