how do you think about the image i edit

this is our office - i edit that image to show the overview of our team and our office.
China
August 28, 2012 7:59pm CST
I start my new job days ago, and i have a lot of things to do on my job , even to edit company image . the following image is what i processed , what do you think about it , hope that someone can give me some useful suggestions and help me to improve
1 response
@cfeist02 (22)
• United States
29 Aug 12
It doesn't really POP to me. If it is an overview of your team then a group picture would be great on top instead of the picture with no people. I assume those are candid shots and just look kinda blah. Maybe some "staged candid" shots would help. Just my personal thoughts, take them with a grain of salt.
• China
29 Aug 12
Very thanks for your advise , i will take new photos and edit the image again. but , what the meaning of " staged candid " shots , i am Chinese , and have many unknown words