A breakup poetry !!!!! Inspried by my friend's love true
By itpsolution
@itpsolution (29)
India
November 14, 2012 8:47am CST
Cries and dies the fallen themes
never ask or says the heaven names
wont be a day a shiny one
nor luck on the way
to be a bridy one!!!
Tries filled my eyes
Pain flowed throw my heart!
you were there..... there!!
saying me to get out
Left alone in the mesh of life
Hurt-en below-n without the songs of lies
my dear!! now not so near
A year how to sort with tear
Hmm!! i have a friend how was in deep love.. time changed his love changed. now he is trying to change i wish him a good luck dedicated to him.
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3 responses
@prashu228 (37524)
• India
14 Nov 12
wow, really nice ,poetry from a break up. yes he should move on ,as the relation is already broken . He will definitely found one whom he deserves.
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@vidhyaprakash_2 (7116)
• India
14 Nov 12
Hi friend, great poem, it clearly shows your pain. Don't worry, break ups are quite common, not every lovers will get success in their love, most of the love stories in the history is having only negative ends. Try your maximum to forget about the past and divert your self with some good things
@itpsolution (29)
• India
14 Nov 12
hi!! i am njv and the pain its not mine its my close friend's.... i am a somewhat kind love poet so i felt and expressed his feeling in it. history are things which we never saw but nice suggestion.. he is presently diverted on work and new relationship.
@Mavic123456 (21893)
• Thailand
14 Nov 12
Wow.. such a sweet sorrow. He will still find other girls. Girls are more than boys nowadays. so no problem with getting a replacement. Don't push if it is not meant to be then it is not.
@itpsolution (29)
• India
14 Nov 12
if he had saw your comment he probably would have said that replacements may happen in our life,but not with our memories.new entries may arises but cant replace my stolen heart.Day and night i know what it felt with her but it wont has a alternate. actually saying he got a new girl, the girl proposed him... after a long force he entered in to that relationship but as a close friend i feel still he remembers all his moment with her..and always tries to ignore the new one
