Description for a Mother.
By Erynn14
@Erynn14 (357)
Malaysia
January 15, 2013 12:07am CST
Hi people out there!
Here I am again busying with my homework yet I still visit MyLot to check out discussions! Well, even though I do check out, since I have much homework to be done, so I actually only read through the title of discussions by people here and do not own much time to read the content and response to them either.
Oh well, back to my topic. So, I am going to need your help on describing mother. The thing I actually want is something that is very dramatic description on the look, attitude with very dramatic words like olive color or something that I heard from my friends.
Well, I am sucks in description things especially when the teacher needing us to write some very dramatic and interesting description for this essay. She wanted us to write out something that we can add in idioms, interesting and dramatic description and so on. So, I really really need help on getting more and more interesting and dramatic description or words or even vocabulary for me to write this essay.
Would you guys please help me out as fast as possible? So that I can take down the notes that given by you guys and I am able to write a very dramatic and good essay for tomorrow. Thank you!
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5 responses
@tassantos7 (70)
• Philippines
15 Jan 13
Mother has midnight black hair that falls in waves. Her skin is fair but not too much to be pale. Her eyes penetrate the soul with sincerity, of dark brown. Her voice is meek nor painfully loud, but stern. Her kindness is for all but justice must be, thought not exercised in anger. Her whole countenance commands high respect and caution only to be soothed by trust earned with struggle.
@tassantos7 (70)
• Philippines
18 Jan 13
You're welcome erynn! Hope it'll be of some use next time! :D
@anaknitatay (1335)
• Philippines
17 Jan 13
it's easy to place descriptions that you can copy can you try this instead?
close your eyes, picture either your own mother, your ideal picture of a mother or a mother that would be based on your story and then describe her as you "see" her and "feel about" her. Show don't tell and see what you come up with. 
@SpikeTheLobster (6403)
•
15 Jan 13
Why not try an alternative approach: instead of describing how she looks or what she does, use another sense. Describe her by how she makes you feel (comfort, security, etc.) or the sounds you associate with her (making food, getting ready for work, etc.) and how they tell you what she's doing and how that makes your house a home. Or something.
@ARIES1973 (11426)
• Legaspi, Philippines
15 Jan 13
Just an additional information that might help. My daughter told me one time that our home cannot be called a home without me.
Have a nice day!
@jamieclavero (187)
• Philippines
15 Jan 13
mothers are the best woman in the world. no one can be as great as a mother. and there is no such thing in the world that can love you the way your mother unconditionally love you. :)
