A story to be continued
@qianlizhifeng (468)
China
March 20, 2013 1:52am CST
Hello,guys,do you like to make stories?Here is a unfinished story.
There lived a young man in my city,who worked in a small company.Every day,he got up at around six and had a quick breakfast for he had to catch the early bus.It always took him about one hour to get to the office where he was working.He was unmarried,so he wished that some day he would meet a beautiful girl who would bring him some romantic emotion and lived happily with him.
This morning,he got on the bus as usual,when he found something strange on an empty seat.It was a wallet with an ID card and some money.From the picture on the ID card,he knew it was a beautiful girl.There was also the owner's work address and telephone number.
It was a girl who had lost the wallet,and coincidently her company was just near where he worked.He thought maybe he should sent the wallet to the girl himself.But he didn't do it because he was worried and also a little afraid to meet the girl.
So at last he chose to post the wallet to the girl.
Some days passed by,nothing happened and he forgot this affair himself.
On a grey afternoon,he was waiting the bus to go home after work.The girl also walked out of the building where she worked and went to the bus stop.Both of them had no talk because only the young man knew girl.And though he had posted the lost to the girl he hadn't told the girl who had posted.
Therefore they both got on the bus as the bus arrived.On the bus,he was standing at the end of the bus and the girl was standing at the middle of the bus.There was so many people on the bus that everybody felt uncomfortable.
Finally,the girl got off the bus with many pessangers,and the man found an empty seat.He went to sit there,thought about the girl and what had happend in the past.
Guys,what will the story happen next?Do you have some interest to make it a romantic love story?Share your wisdom and your emotions.
3 responses
@Bluedoll (16773)
• Canada
20 Mar 13
I think the girl was very grateful to the man and he was happy to meet her because there was something about her that made him feel attracted. He began wondering if this had happened for a reason and so yes they developed a relationship.
They were both happy they had found each other. After they got to know each other better the man bought her a new purse.
@qianlizhifeng (468)
• China
21 Mar 13
Thank you for your imagination.Yeah,most of us in the world are kind people,and most of us hope kind people should have a perfect end.
Thanks!
@roshigo58 (4859)
• Pune, India
20 Mar 13
Hi,
Very beautiful and interesting story. I would like to complete this story. One day that man was sitting in the bus and was looking out of the bus. That beautiful girl came into the bus and luckily she sat on the seat beside that man. Man told her about her wallet. She was surprised and thanked him. Their friendship started from that day. After some days their friendship changed into love and they got married and lived happily. Thus this story has happy end. I am not a writer but I have tried to write the story first time. Do you like it?
@qianlizhifeng (468)
• China
21 Mar 13
Thank your for your response.You have offered a wonderful end.In our mind,the young man was just an ordinary man in the city,but he was very kind.And the girl was not only beautiful,but also grateful and understanding.So most of us hope they would live together and have a good future.
Thanks for you sharing.
@skyandgrassplot (1497)
• China
21 Mar 13
Haha,nice story,but I just wanna say,romantic love story only can be seen in the TV drama,in the reality world,unless this boy is rich man or have a great job and with a handsome face,otherwise there is nothing happen between them,any way,I still want to read the end of this story and hope that some people will have a best ending for it.