"breathes there a man with soul so dead, who never to himself has said"
@Hatley (163776)
Garden Grove, California
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@allknowing (136369)
• India
10 Apr 13
I did some search and found the following link:
http://www.legallanguage.com/resources/poems/breathesthere/
I love old poetry but had not come across this one. Obviously it is written about someone who does not love his country.
And by the way, what do you think of the following poem:
[i]DROP THE ATTITUDE
Drop the attitude walk with me
You will view the world the way I see
The flowers the trees will catch your eye
To the material world you’ll say goodbye
The four legged kind will draw you out
Their unceasing love there’s no doubt
Your caring heart will try and reach
The helpless kind, without a breach.
To bond with those that you love and care
The struggle forever will be there
You will feel the tugs now and then
But that will end we don’t know when
You need to strive a heart to win
It may not be your kith or kin
The world is there at your feet
A good heart you’re sure to meet.
Plan you life plan it well
But what’s our future none can tell
So be it come what may
Sun is shining make your hay
Come with me, stop being you
You’ll see the world in a different hue
The flowers, the trees will catch your eye,
To the material world you’ll say goodbye
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@allknowing (136369)
• India
10 Apr 13
Yes GG. This is one of my compositons. I write when I get into the mood. Glad you liked it.
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@allknowing (136369)
• India
10 Apr 13
That tug is about the constant struggle we need to experience to bond with those we love and we will never know when this struggle will end.
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@celticeagle (166911)
• Boise, Idaho
10 Apr 13
This seems to be an excerpt from “The Lay of the Last Minstrel” by Sir Walter Scott. I have never read it. It is as old as the hills. He lived 1771 until 1832. That is even older than me. lol
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@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
16 Apr 13
oh celtic I was also shy and to make matters worse the history teacher and the homemaking teacher had a thing going between them which made us high schoolers gossip as the male history teacher was already married and his wife was a really nice lady.The homemaking teacher was really skinny and her name was Miss Pickett which made me think of the thin pickets in a picket fence.She always had such flimsy excuses of needing chalk or a black board eraser or paper.,He did not help as he would leave and put someone in charge as he was gone for twenty minutes.They did not seem to realize we kids knew what they were doing as he came back all rumpled and red faced,. So I just did not learn much about history that semester but about men cheating their wives. ol
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@celticeagle (166911)
• Boise, Idaho
14 Apr 13
I had some of the same problems in those classes. Plus I was extremely shy.
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@allknowing (136369)
• India
11 Apr 13
This happens to me often kala. Randomly a tune sticks a tune from days gone by. It remains there driving me crazy. This happened to me some time back. My sister and I were in the choir and this song suddenly appeared from nowhere. I asked her for the words and even she was struggling and then I remembered the Internet and I got the words. Just for you guys, I recorded it yesterday and created a small video clip (Box No. 4 above)
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@Loverbear (4918)
• United States
10 Apr 13
There is another great site for finding poetry that you remember bits and pieces of... it's The Poem Hunter . Com. I pasted the line in the search engine and it went promptly to this site.
I used to write poetry when I was much younger, some of it was pretty off beat. One I remember was:
[i]Wither Wither little rose
Crushed beneath people's toes
You begin to droop
You begin to rot
I bury you in the family plot
Withered Withered little rose
Crushed beneath people's toes
You used to smell so nice and sweet
Now you smell like sweaty feet
Okay, Shakespeare I ain't!!!
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@BarBaraPrz (47308)
• St. Catharines, Ontario
10 Apr 13
More like Ogden Nash. But I like it.
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@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
10 Apr 13
hi Loverbear lost myh comment so copying. I love it as ikts a humoours poem and lord knows, we need more humor Barbara yes it does sound like some of Ogden Nash's fun poems.I loved a book I had of Ogden Nash's poems as they always made me smile and laugh. I now
wonder whatever happened to that book ? Probably my son has it as he finally got all our stuff out of storage. I also lovce to write poetry now,
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@cupkitties (7421)
• United States
10 Apr 13
That's from Sir Walter Scott. Look up The Lay of the Last Minstrel
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@wolfie34 (26771)
• United Kingdom
10 Apr 13
It is poetry my friend, I took the liberty of Googling it for you and it's Breathes There The Man, by Sir Walter Scott. If that helps plus the link for the poem in its entirety.
http://www.faeriekeeper.net/poetry9.htm
Not a referral link
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
10 Apr 13
Found it. It is from a poem by Sir Walter Scott about patriotism. Here is the link
http://bartleby.com/101/547.html
I used to read a lot of Sir Walter Scott, mostly his novels, some that have been made into movies, but little of his poetry.
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@BarBaraPrz (47308)
• St. Catharines, Ontario
10 Apr 13
It may not be as old as the hills, but close. It's by Sir Walter Scott.
http://holyjoe.org/poetry/scott.htm
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@BarBaraPrz (47308)
• St. Catharines, Ontario
10 Apr 13
Maybe. Who knows what makes random things pop up in our minds?
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@bunnybon7 (50973)
• Holiday, Florida
11 Apr 13
i see you got lots of help before i saw this. i have the same fondness for a poem called, "even this shall pass awat" its always been my favorite poem to help me feel better about things. when i was 10yrs old i read it and memorised it. yet over the years ive forgotten parts of it. so now and then i go try and find my book with it or look it up online. oh its by theodore tilton. btw.
@bunnybon7 (50973)
• Holiday, Florida
17 Apr 13
yes when we are young we love the poetry so much. i learned many by heart that i didnt have to for school or anything. i just liked reading them in my mind you might say like Eugene Feilds poems. i learned many of his by heart also. i used to read and write poetry by the hours when i was a teen.
@gloryacam (5540)
• Philippines
10 Apr 13
Ahmm is it this one?
http://www.legallanguage.com/resources/poems/breathesthere/
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@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
16 Apr 13
oh I was going to the U of cal at Irvine for my last two years. I was 43 when I started and 45 when I graduated.I also took some creative writing too.The sad thing is I did not do anything with my degree as I did not want to teach but to write and get published,.
I have written but have not been published.
@roshigo58 (4859)
• Pune, India
11 Apr 13
Hi,
I haven't read this poem before but because of your discussion I get an opportunity to read this poem through the link given by mylot friends.. It is a good poem.
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@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
14 Apr 13
hi rosjhigo yes I also like that poem and most of Sir Walter Scotts poetry too.