Fallen Deep

India
April 16, 2013 11:10am CST
Hey buddies, Have you lost your hope on someone at anypoint in time? Like it felt as if you will never meet them or see that person again in your life? That moment is too painful and i am not sure if our heart is strong enough to take such kind of a pain.. The character here was not that strong at heart. He lost his hope, his love, his life..and thus, he wishes if he could just see his love before he parts away.. ************************************************************************************ The clouds are on the move slightly turning red as they flow, and the breeze makes it to the groove happily as they go... The faint shadow follows Me searching the way to get to You, and all that's left to see was the red sky turning blue... The distance seems quite long and I go ahead on My way, silently humming to My song wet in the eyes in this dull day... Wish if ever I could reach You before this day ends in darkness, before the sky shows itself in black just before the twinkle of the stars reach to Me... ************************************************************************************ I could not depict death here, or you can say i avoided death here..i did not want him to die. but he thinks otherwise..He just wants her before the twinkle of the stars reach him...just a short span of time after the stars come out.. I wonder if he's going to die..poor him.. Share your views please. :)
2 responses
• Philippines
16 Apr 13
Nice poem Its bring me a hard feeling to a someone leave behind.Its can be how sad like my grandmother die without and clue she was die.
• India
16 Apr 13
ohh that's so sad. I hope you had a great time with her.
• Philippines
16 Apr 13
how nice poem? it bring me strong feeling to belo;nging for someone you love.
• India
16 Apr 13
thanks :) SO what did you feel?