Grammarand sentence recommendation from a minister a letter ,,

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An individual wants me to write a letter to a minister(high position in our state) requesting him to recommend for my daughter's entry into a new school ,first standard. My daughter has finished UKG in different school and now she has to get admission in another school that is very difficult to get. Hence, I am approaching the minister for recommendation so that the school authority would give admission. So I am writing as follows RESPECTED SIR ? HONORABLE SIR (TELL ME which is correct as he is a great person} I ,(name), father of (name) hereby request you to kindly recommend my daughter for the first standard in (school name). thanking you PLEASE TELL ME THE FORMAT AND CORRECT any mistakes in the above letter. PART SECOND I also have to write directly to the school authority requesting them to give admission to my daughter Respected madam (principal is female) I , (name), father of (name) request you to allow my daughter to study in your school for the first standard. I am very much thankful to you for the admission thanking you The above two are the requestion letters and hence I REQUEST YOU TO HELP ME WITH EXACT LETTER ON PAR WITH STANDARDS. If you want to change entire letter format and words please go ahead .