Baby’s Breath
By mere admin
@admiano (1)
Lagos, Nigeria
June 30, 2013 9:35pm CST
Who said anything about forgiveness?
Please, be honest with yourself. Forgiveness
is not what you want. And, to be fair, for-
givens is not what she’s granting. She pours
that out over onto unto many
feet, every day. She forgave you, almost, be-
fore you were born. We all lose track. This was
to have been sonnet 5 in a series
(make it so), and, so’s to square it with
the rest, and make a circle of breath, be
honest: you want her miracle. Yes,
again. She was one long before meeting
you, passing, you, passing, beautiful …
and you saw it, not. And you saw her. But –
2 responses
@fruitcakeliz (2638)
• United States
1 Jul 13
it seems intriguing and interesting, but the spacing in the way you typed/posted it makes it really hard to read like a sonnet...and also your info about it being the 5th in a series seems to have wound up in the middle of it.....hard to read and get the flow...