Soft, Gentle Rain

Parkersburg, West Virginia
July 1, 2013 6:22pm CST
Have you ever sat and listened to the rain as it pattered on a tin roof? There is no more relaxing sound in the world! I have written a poem titled "Soft, Gentle Rain". It discusses the rain pelting against another structure that many find relaxing as well: the window panes.. I hope you all enjoy it. Softly it pelts the window pane It makes a soft playing song I could listen to it all day long It's the sound of a soft, gentle rain It's splashing over and over again It gives one the feeling nothing is wrong It makes one feel strong It makes me forget my pain It gives comfort to my soul It makes my heart sing with joy I feel completely whole I'm dodging the world and being coy The rain is pelting all around Oh what a beautiful sound!
1 response
• United States
2 Jul 13
rhyme is ok........but reading/visual stand point, 11 lines that all start with "I" or "IT": seems too much and it messes with the flow....