Short stories
By Sage Witten
@Iamathena (1)
, New Jersey
August 16, 2013 11:19pm CST
Hi guys here's a link to my short stories blog check it out and leave coments. You can even request that I write a short stories on whatever you like and you will get credit for your ideas
This blog is about short stories written by me. it is all completely fiction . if you have any sugestions about short stories you would like me to write or a suggestion about the next part of a short story email me @ sage. witten@ yahoo. com there will be.
1 response
@fruitcakeliz (2638)
• United States
18 Aug 13
I just kind of skimmed some of the page, but it is cool that you are interesting in writing. If I may, I would like to suggest you pay a little more attention to your grammar and sentence structure if you plan on trying to go further in your writing career. Very short, abrupt sentences, new sentences started when it should actually be a comma.....these are just a few things i would suggest to make it FLOW better while reading it. (I am no expert writer, but i do read a lot....and that is what was distracting to me) This is only meant to be constructive criticism. Keep on with the good work!
