Her Story (Dying in Despair) -songwriting-

wishing for love and slowly dying in despair
Philippines
May 18, 2014 1:21am CST
"Her Story" (dying in despair) by: tamelesss (march 19, 2014) I. She sat in the corner With a paper and a blade She cut her wrist and Started writing her story II. She knows the world will never listen Still she tells us her story She's cold and she's lonely But she's hidding her pain Chorus She is screaming inside Wishing someone would care She is crying tonight Maybe you really don't care She is putting her life on hold You know this is not fair She is wishing for that love And slowly dying in despair III. She believes in true love But she can't find a real man She tried searching for him In a world created by man IV. And even if she's bleeding She still writes with all her love You know that it's real cause it was written in blood Chorus She is screaming inside Wishing someone would care She is crying tonight Maybe you really don't care She is putting her life on hold You know this is not fair She is wishing for that love And slowly dying in despair -tameless shine- March 19, 2014
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@Bluedoll (16773)
• Canada
19 May 14
This song has a lot of feeling in it. I know it is about despair but thinking maybe the title could have the word "shame" in it. Maybe because despair is a close relative of the word shame? Thanks for posting.
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• Philippines
20 May 14
thank you so much bluedoll... and thanks for the very kind suggestion :-)
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@JoeLowry (24)
• Shanghai, China
20 May 14
Nice work. Looking forward someone can sing it.
• Philippines
20 May 14
ohhh thank you for this very sweet comment!!! :-)