Inner thoughts...

Jaipur, India
September 2, 2015 7:45pm CST
I was feeling a bit depressed, so wrote these thoughts- All this feels so strange, One minute you are a whole and other minute you feel a change, I don't know whether these are mood swings, or a sudden desire to feel my wings, I want to break apart all the rules, and fly in the sky with an added fuel..
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• Indonesia
11 Sep 15
It's just the poetry or picturing what you feel right now? But it's really nice poetry. I often write poetry when I'm in mood and yes, feel much better after that
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• Indonesia
15 Sep 15
@KomaltHeCuRious It;s been a long time I don't write poetry. I need some mood booster first
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• Jaipur, India
12 Sep 15
answer to your first ques- yes, both, poetry picturing what I feel. nice to hear, you too write, I would love to hear some..
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@dpk262006 (58678)
• Delhi, India
11 Sep 15
Very nice poetry. Mood swings are common and it happens with each one of us. Sometimes, when we succeed in something, we feel elated. After half an hour if someone shares any sad story, we feel bad and may become tense. Whenever you feel depressed, try to divert your attention to some constructive work e.g. you could phone a friend, you could draw a sketch, if you are a right handed person you can try writing with your left hand or vice versa. Don't allow negative thoughts overtake your mind. Try to think something positive, which will make you feel good. For example, you could count your blessings which will make you feel glad inside.
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@dpk262006 (58678)
• Delhi, India
16 Sep 15
@KomaltHeCuRious - You are always welcome.
• Jaipur, India
12 Sep 15
thank you so much !!
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• United States
3 Sep 15
This is exactly how I feel from minute to minute each day..to break free! It is a beautiful poem which expresses a feeling of overwhelming wish to escape. I hope you feel okay friend, I know how it is. Thanks for sharing your lovely writing too I love it.
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• Jaipur, India
3 Sep 15
thank you so much these are just random thoughts....
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• India
5 Sep 15
Nice...a poem often makes us feel good by taking everything what we write... when i feel depressed, i talk to my God....i share all my problems with Him..it makes me feel better....and i get the solution........
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• Jaipur, India
5 Sep 15
me too, I often talk to him.my discussion with him is very interesting !!