Have you ever tried to write a poem?
By John Welford
@indexer (4852)
Leicester, England
33 responses
@johnnydod (25)
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4 Oct 15
I do write poetry but have not written any for some time now, I did begin to doubt if I should write any more
More I the fool, for wasting time, for writing verse for writing rhyme
I should use my time for those who follow, as did Zeus as did Apollo
Like the god of truth and prophecy, I prepare for those that see
There is no secret rendezvous, no tryst, or hidden fond adieu
Just words set out as I see things, my look on life and all it brings
I write of nature how we abuse it, I try to show how we can use it
I write of love, its joy and pain, I write of children who cry in vain
More I the fool to think that I can show the way to happiness
Its in your hands, how things will be, if we succeed if we progress
So take this world, it's for the young, not for us poets all unsung
But if you read what I have writ, more I the fool to think to quit
For if one word, one verse, one rhyme, should make you think
More I the fool, I waste no time.
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@jaboUK (64354)
• United Kingdom
4 Oct 15
@johnnydod Well I like it a lot Johnny.
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
4 Oct 15
I like the sentiment, but the poem itself needs a bit of attention! There are some good lines here, but others that just don't work.
@maggs224 (2320)
• Alicante, Spain
4 Oct 15
@johnnydod For what it is worth, in my view it was not a waste of time Johnny
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@maggs224 (2320)
• Alicante, Spain
4 Oct 15
I never tried writing poetry because I knew I didn't know how. In fact I have trouble even understanding some poetry. Other people would be waxing lyrical about things in poems that I could not see, even when they pointed them out. I never got much out of reading poetry, but I do love hearing poets read their poetry.
Some years ago I was watching a poet being interviewed and he encouraged people to write a poem. The way he spoke about poetry was inspiring so I foolishly gave writing poetry a try.
I wrote four poems, in spite of knowing next to nothing about poetry. I published them on-line on HubPages but under a different user name.
I had the feeling that my efforts would be a bit of a disaster and I didn't want the poems associated with me.
I wrote the four poems, that is what I called them though I doubt that is what you would call them, in a couple days.
I have not been back there much since then. I am glad that I wrote under a different user name.
According to my stats the poems got about 4000 views and 125 comments. Half of those comments I would think would be my responses .
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
4 Oct 15
Poetry come in many shapes and sizes, and that is the beauty of it. However, because it consists of words, and everybody uses words all the time, many people think they can write poetry when - to be frank - they can't. I think that most people are capable of using words in a poetic way, for a line or two maybe, but not of sustaining the effort for a complete poem.
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@sallypup (61627)
• Centralia, Washington
4 Oct 15
I have been a free verse poet for generations. Look me up on Amazon when you get bored. I am not sure what success is- I am not in the New Yorker. My work has been a part of several chapbooks in little presses. Poetry is just life for me.
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@TiarasOceanView (70022)
• United States
3 Oct 15
I have written many poems.
I found one the other day that I had forgotten about that is in honor of heritage and family.
Quite good if I dont mind saying so haha
I would never be able to write like that now.
I started writing when I was a child and lost it as the years went by.
Rhyming was the original then as time went on got more freestyle.
Do you write poetry then John?
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@TiarasOceanView (70022)
• United States
3 Oct 15
@indexer Love reading it too John.
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@TiarasOceanView (70022)
• United States
3 Oct 15
@Susan2015 Oh its not personal but no one has ever read it cept my son..remind me again..Ill try to find it and post it .. thanks for asking.
@wetnosedogs (1533)
• United States
3 Oct 15
I believe I tried a poem or two about the wetnosedogs.
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@OneOfMany (12150)
• United States
3 Oct 15
I like rhyming and free verse because I can make it however I want.
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@BACONSTRIPSXXX (14351)
• West Haven, Connecticut
3 Oct 15
Yeah I have wrote a few in my lifetime lol
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@troyburns (1405)
• New Zealand
4 Oct 15
I've always found free verse easier and more satisfying to write, and, given the awful straining for rhyme employed by so many 'amateur' poets, I usually find it more satisfying to read. I remember your many poetry reviews from the old Helium days John. Always insightful.
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@rusty2rusty (6763)
• Defiance, Ohio
3 Oct 15
Yes, I have written poems for over 20 years. I haven't written any recently.
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@intal_carl (299)
• Quezon City, Philippines
7 Oct 15
I really have talent in writing Filipino poems. I am a literary writer in my university right now because I have this talent.
@garymarsh6 (23404)
• United Kingdom
4 Oct 15
No I always felt quite inadequate at school when we had to do this and still today would not bother as I know there are far more talented people out there. Jabo is the expert here!
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