Do you agree to this description of something strong?
@MelodiousMind (5)
India
October 22, 2015 9:10am CST
Strong is to feel the urge to be free, it is to break up the mess and stand out as a tree, it is the red burning marks left after his grip on her arms, it is the taste of unfaithfulness on his lips, it is the shock of her empowerment to him, it is the proactive wilderness of the then silent tamed, it is the broken threads of their disliking tastes, the breaking up of their maddening lames. It will be up soon, it will then hurt ... he will be engraved in his own lies, it will let him be free with the suffocation of a mice, And then in his death bed he would be commanded to choose. In the given options of weak or strong, would he then opt to choose strong again?
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@destry (2572)
• Kirkwall, Scotland
22 Oct 15
Sorry, you have lost me. I have no idea of your train of thought.
@MelodiousMind (5)
• India
22 Oct 15
Sorry, I would work on it more for clearer and crispier understanding. Thank you for your review. :D
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@destry (2572)
• Kirkwall, Scotland
22 Oct 15
@MelodiousMind You lost me talking about suffocation of a mice. Why could the mouse not breath?
@MelodiousMind (5)
• India
22 Oct 15
@destry Actually I took mice here as the smallest element. So that the mentioned soul would then suffocate in the smallest of the smallest corner in his mind or heart and then eventually understand his eternal peace lies in his freedom.
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@rahulvsmokiee (3110)
• Thiruvananthapuram, India
22 Oct 15
Even i would too love to choose strong as in this world only strongest people has value in this society.
