An Age Old Problem

@WorDazza (15830)
Manchester, England
November 19, 2015 2:21am CST
Bit of a cheat this one. It's a piece of (very) short fiction originally posted you know where. It was one of the few things I saved and after reading it again I thought it deserved a wider audience. Apologies if you've seen it before! It's called 'Check Mate'. The Grandmaster allowed himself a brief moment of self-congratulation at his last move. It had to be the briefest of moments. So many boards to service! He sighed as he heaved his heavy, ageing frame into the seat at the next board. This was the one causing him trouble. All of the others were under control, going exactly how he wanted. But not this one! He was under attack from every angle, rapidly losing control. His brow furrowed as he checked his timepiece. 2000 or thereabouts! How had it got into this state? He did his best to get around every board as quickly as he could but there were so many. Even so, it was only 2000 years since he last intervened on this one. How the hell had things degenerated in that time? Others had lasted millions of years but this lot had managed to screw up so emphatically in such a short space of time. He checked his timepiece again, aware that he needed to make a move. Do something! A look of exasperation spread across his craggy face. "Forget it! They're beyond help. They're on their own now!" he growled, and with a casual flick of his hand the Grandmaster Of Destiny sent the board marked 'Earth' and all its accompanying pieces, spiraling into the void.
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@Fleura (30539)
• United Kingdom
19 Nov 15
We are already in the void aren't we - isn't that what 'space' is? So what happens next? Write the next instalment and you could become another Douglas Adams or Terry Pratchett.
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@Fleura (30539)
• United Kingdom
19 Nov 15
@WorDazza Nice idea but you know it's impossible to prove a negative?
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
19 Nov 15
@WorDazza Indeed I do clever clogs .Probably used the wrong wording there! What he actually proves is that the universe has existed in a cyclic state of expansion and contraction infinitely. The obvious implication being that there was no finite point of creation.
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
19 Nov 15
Oh, I fear I'm nowhere near worthy enough to be mentioned in the same sentence as those two. I must confess, the idea did come from a novel I partially planned a few years ago, the premise being a gifted mathematics student proves the universe had no finite point of creation thus pretty much doing away with the concept of a creator and thus God. The story then centres on the various religious factions trying to bump him off as well as his girlfriends father being after him for getting his daughter pregnant. The character in this short story came from the God character in the novel.
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@glenniah (1197)
• Mandurah, Australia
19 Nov 15
A clever piece of fiction wordazza. Well done!
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
19 Nov 15
Thank you very much. It's one of those that you forget you wrote and when you read it it's like someone else wrote it so you can be pretty objective about it. So if i could give myself a 'like' I would
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@glenniah (1197)
• Mandurah, Australia
19 Nov 15
@WorDazza Go for it, give yourself a like. hehe
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@Asylum (47893)
• Manchester, England
19 Nov 15
We did not need his help because we already made a key to access the void our selves.
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@Asylum (47893)
• Manchester, England
19 Nov 15
@WorDazza Once we had opened the door we did not even bother to lock it again.
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
19 Nov 15
And didn't we just jump right on in with both feet??
@Rollo1 (16679)
• Boston, Massachusetts
19 Nov 15
If you can get the address of this chessmaster, I would like to register a complaint about several of my recent moves. I don't think they were legal or fair. And I really hate this square! It's not even in a nice neighborhood. I feel like such a pawn...
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
19 Nov 15
I know what you mean. I'm stuck between a queen and a bishop!! It's an eclectic neighbourhood!!
• Preston, England
19 Nov 15
And I was just about to take one of his knights too - ah well. Great idea for a story.
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• Preston, England
19 Nov 15
@WorDazza he should take on Bill & Ted at Pocket Battleships instead
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
20 Nov 15
@arthurchappell He'd almost certainly lose that one!!
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
19 Nov 15
Maybe that's why he gave up in frustration. Realised you had him cornered!!
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@Poppylicious (11133)
19 Nov 15
Poor earth, just thrown into the void like that. Of course, we could be one of the Grandmaster of Destiny's better projects. :)
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
19 Nov 15
Then I feel seriously sorry for the ones that are worse!!
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@troyburns (1405)
• New Zealand
19 Nov 15
Well, this explains a lot of things. Just as Einstein suspected, He doesn't play at dice; He's a chess man.
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
20 Nov 15
Well of course.It was always going to be a game of skill. Just a shame the pieces he has to play with are mostly broken!!!
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• United Kingdom
19 Nov 15
brilliant. thanks for sharing it again I missed it first time around.
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
20 Nov 15
Thank you very much. Twas my pleasure!!!
@paigea (36316)
• Canada
30 Jan 16
I am sure we were flung into the void long ago.
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@WorDazza (15830)
• Manchester, England
31 Jan 16
Not so sure about being flung into the void. I suspect we have always been in the void!!
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