What was I thinking?

@troyburns (1405)
New Zealand
November 29, 2015 10:58pm CST
If you've seen my previous post, you'll know it was a writing experiment which didn't turn out quite as planned. Most of the comments it received either missed the point entirely or were cries of confusion. Only two or three people seemed to have figured out what I was saying, and as the writer I have to take the blame for that. So, what was I thinking? A lot of things, actually, and maybe that's part of the problem. For starters, I was peeved that my post about Syria - one that took ages to construct - was apparently read by just four people. So I decided to put together something that wouldn't be much of a challenge to read or write. With the Syria post's failure to launch, it also made sense to shoot for something with a broad appeal, and there are few things more popular at myLot than talking about myLot. Double that if you mention earnings. (Sometimes I don't miss Bubblews at all.) That part of my plan worked, at least. "Can I earn $1 a day?" is now my second-most popular post. I was interested to know if people actually bothered to read posts or were happy to add comments on the basis of a title and a couple of lines. To help things along, I kept things brief so there could be few excuses for not reading the whole thing. Unfortunately, the reveal didn't really work as I kept things too brief. Did most visitors make it past the opening lines? The jury is still out on that one, but I have my suspicions. A few folks said that they were misled by the title, so I dropped the word "here" and nothing changed. What really needed fixing was the word "I". Incidentally, the main idea came from a funny story I read recently. It's an autobiography of Severus Snape, written as if he'd been raised in the ghetto. Only at the end do you find out who it's about - a great "a-ha" moment. For what it's worth, the post was about something important after all - child labor. There is absolutely no comparison between our efforts to earn a myLot dollar and what 200 million school-age kids around the world are called on to do for the same amount. I hoped my post would bring this into perspective without hitting people over the head with facts. Guess not, so here are the facts: That figure of 200 million equates to roughly one in seven of all children in the world. Asia has by far the largest number of children at work, with Pakistan and Bangladesh among the major offenders, but the highest percentage of kids in full time employment is in sub-Saharan Africa. More than half of these children are working under hazardous conditions. This includes an estimated 300,000 child soldiers, millions of sex slaves, and a number you don't want to know about working in diseased and overcrowded firetrap sweatshops. A lot of these at-risk workers are also employed in agriculture. In fact, almost 100 million children around the world are expected to work the land. It's hard to say what an average working day might be, but an aggregate of studies suggests it's about 14 hours. Despite these hardships, the greatest risk to most child laborers is that they will never have a chance to go to school. Denied an education, they remain ripe for exploitation, and so the cycle of poverty and dependence continues on to the next generation. Thanks for reading. Heeeere's Johnny...
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@valmnz (17097)
• New Zealand
30 Nov 15
Just as an aside, and I am one who is probably missing the mark here, I've come to realise the posts that do best on here are of the more personal nature, nothing too heavy that requires thinking. People seem to enjoy reading about the lives of others.
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@troyburns (1405)
• New Zealand
30 Nov 15
@valmnz - I don't think there's any doubt about that, but I'm not made that way. I'm happy to read personal stories but I'm quite private and don't really like writing about myself. Besides, my life is incredibly dull.
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@valmnz (17097)
• New Zealand
30 Nov 15
@troyburns so is mine! Who wants to read about a writer struggling to make sense of things gone by! But I enjoy trying to turn the ordinary into something a little bit interesting. How was today in your part of the world? I see by the TV weather, we shared the highest temps with Kapiti coast here today, 25C. I thought of you whn I poste my post ths morning, as last time you saw that pic you recognised the location.
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@valmnz (17097)
• New Zealand
30 Nov 15
@troyburns incidentally, another aside, in case you're wondering, I do spend much of my day writing seriously, so this is where I blob out would hate you to think I'm totally empty headed!
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@JudyEv (339393)
• Rockingham, Australia
30 Nov 15
I always read posts right through if I intend to make a comment. Your in-depth posts take me out of my depth a bit. I don't feel knowledgeable enough I guess to take the discussion further - and maybe others feel the same. It is a great shame as I enjoy your posts and I ponder on them but I often don't feel I have anything to contribute.
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@troyburns (1405)
• New Zealand
1 Dec 15
@JudyEv - That's fine. One of the reasons I sometimes write lengthy posts is to give readers enough information to discuss the topic intelligently. You've always been able to do that, but I guess my interests might be a little too alien for some readers.
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@JudyEv (339393)
• Rockingham, Australia
1 Dec 15
@troyburns And my travel posts at the moment I feel need to be a certain length or that don't impart much information at all.
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@GardenGerty (160610)
• United States
4 Dec 15
In spite of possibly preferring fluff, I think this site, and the online community need the meat of things as well. Your article will be one I remember tomorrow and later in the week. So many others are here and gone and do not make a space in my mind or heart. It also leads me to remember that fact that sites like myLot and Bubblews, which represent pocket change to us are possibly the little bit of difference for someone else when it comes to survival. No wonder so many come here looking to earn in whatever way possible.
• United States
30 Nov 15
i've found that many folks't places such's these tend to gravitate to 'fluff'. seems they don't wish to know'f the sufferin' 'n hardships 'f the masses. 'course, i aint been 'round much't all fer o'er a month now i believe? i find it most heartbreakin' that so many'f the youth in the world're denied'n education 'n 've the burden 'f workin' long hours doin' dangerous schtuff fer very lil pay.... my thoughts'n the cheap clothes? despicable. same fer the other schtuff bein' made'n many'f those countries. i say shame'n the businesses who've demonstrated lil thought 'xcept fer linin' their pockets.
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@troyburns (1405)
• New Zealand
1 Dec 15
@crazyhorseladycx - It makes me furious that the executives of these companies take home million dollar paychecks while exploiting others for profit. And it's not just the execs. I once read that Tiger Woods received the equivalent of the annual wage of every third world Nike worker for lending his name and image to their products.
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@boiboing (13153)
• Northampton, England
30 Nov 15
I don't think it pays to try to be too clever with posts on here. Bearing in mind the geographic spread and the different levels of fluency, the more subtle stuff can go wide of the mark too often.
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@boiboing (13153)
• Northampton, England
1 Dec 15
@troyburns if you please yourself then that is enough.
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@troyburns (1405)
• New Zealand
1 Dec 15
@boiboing - It should be, but a sneaky corner of my psyche keeps on trying to be an educator. I think these things matter, and I'm happy if one or two people start to think that I may be onto something.
@troyburns (1405)
• New Zealand
1 Dec 15
@boiboing - I'm not going to stop trying. It's a hopeless cause trying to please everybody, so I may as well keep on doing what I do. Hopefully I can write clearly enough for anyone interested to understand what I'm saying.
@norcal (4889)
• Franklinton, North Carolina
1 Dec 15
I don't think a popular post has to be personal, but it has a better shot if it's pithy. That is something your previous post was IMO.
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@troyburns (1405)
• New Zealand
1 Dec 15
@norcal - Thanks Sherry. I suppose the ideal post is something short and punchy - that makes its point quickly - but still resonates with the reader. That's not easy to do.
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@norcal (4889)
• Franklinton, North Carolina
1 Dec 15
@troyburns That is very true.
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