A song is progress
By Derrick
@nestea89 (102)
Canada
December 21, 2015 10:05am CST
I am going to share a song with you all that I am working on. It has just sat around until recently. It was one of those things that get better with time and, that you learn to understand more. It seems like the more I dig my own writing up, the more I love it now more than I did back then.
Daddy
His pain is all gone
But the memory still stays
His last words were to me
Were "please just stay"
Stay with me here,
Until I fade away
In this box I will lay
Until the end of my days
Please daddy don’t leave
Don’t leave me here alone
I have so much to tell you
And so much to show
Years go by and still I try
To embrace your life
But then I cry
Daddy don’t leave me
Don’t leave me here alone
I have so much to show you
So much I’ve grown
I hope that your proud of me
I made it on my own
I have a wife
And a son of my own
He's named after you,
What a wise thing to do
It was all my idea
For a great man like you
That you once were
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@HanVanMeegerin (1161)
• United States
22 Dec 15
@nestea89 I like it. I think you have talent. I'd like to co-write a song with someone.
@nestea89 (102)
• Canada
22 Dec 15
@HanVanMeegerin Leaning towards rock, the kind of rock that is very listenable.