A song is progress

@nestea89 (102)
Canada
December 21, 2015 10:05am CST
I am going to share a song with you all that I am working on. It has just sat around until recently. It was one of those things that get better with time and, that you learn to understand more. It seems like the more I dig my own writing up, the more I love it now more than I did back then. Daddy His pain is all gone But the memory still stays His last words were to me Were "please just stay" Stay with me here, Until I fade away In this box I will lay Until the end of my days Please daddy don’t leave Don’t leave me here alone I have so much to tell you And so much to show Years go by and still I try To embrace your life But then I cry Daddy don’t leave me Don’t leave me here alone I have so much to show you So much I’ve grown I hope that your proud of me I made it on my own I have a wife And a son of my own He's named after you, What a wise thing to do It was all my idea For a great man like you That you once were
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• United States
22 Dec 15
@nestea89 I like it. I think you have talent. I'd like to co-write a song with someone.
@nestea89 (102)
• Canada
22 Dec 15
That is just the start! I have 8 others ready to go, just can't never find the proper person to partner up with. I would love to be able to do them semi acoustic, keep it simple yet still sounds good.
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• United States
22 Dec 15
@nestea89 what style/genre of music?
@nestea89 (102)
• Canada
22 Dec 15
@HanVanMeegerin Leaning towards rock, the kind of rock that is very listenable.