My attempt at poetry - A Dream came True!
By Scindhia H
@Scindhia (1906)
India
January 6, 2016 12:16am CST
I'm interested in reading poetry. Now I have slowly started exploring my writing skills as well. This is how my attempt turned out
I was waiting for a long time
To meet a respectable man
A gentle man of manners and looks
With a bold and joyful heart,
Undoubtedly in most good books
And believes in a positive start
With whom I can cross the threshold of wedding
Without the fear of boredom
With whom my life would be so blissful
That it would become wholesome
A man who knows no boundaries
A man who likes a woman as she is
A man who doesn't demand my legs be waxed
A man who doesn't expect his house be fixed
A man who knows I'm a daddy's girl
And in his warmth makes my toes curl
A man who is not afraid to call my mom as his
A man who refers to my sister as sis
A man whose deeds everyone wants to hear
A man who spreads love and good cheer
To marry such a man was a dream
A wistful flash, no doubt the other gender's cream
But then it happened just like that
One phone call and I was flat
Madly, deeply, truly in love
To this day my happiness, to you I owe
Never till now did I feel blue
A happy dream you are, that finally came true!
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5 responses
@jaboUK (64354)
• United Kingdom
6 Jan 16
I enjoyed your poem, but it would make it easier to read if you broke it up into verses, with a space between them. A solid block of text is a bit off-putting. I hope you don't mind my saying so, but I do poetry myself and know that way works better
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@hiru84 (942)
• Malaysia
6 Jan 16
I enjoyed your poem. If you practice more you will be a professional poet soon.
@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
1 Feb 16
Found your dream husband or boyfriend??? Anyways I enjoyed it very much...Good job!!
P. S. And I want a man like the one mentioned in the poetry too.......