The Napkin
By JasonPMW
@Wonderwall79 (116)
Te Puke, New Zealand
January 12, 2016 5:38pm CST
The Napkin
In a little beach side cafe
Where she works every other day
I order the usual and sit at the table
In love with a waitress unable
To summon the courage to say
Would you like to go out someday
If she could only see
The man that's inside of me
She wouldn't have to look anymore
I'm the one she's been looking for
One of these days I'm gonna leave a note
On a napkin she'll read what I wrote
To the girl who smiles when we greet
Who tells me sir please take a seat
I wanna thank you for making my day
But there's something Ive been meaning to say
Behind your glasses I see a person
Who's beauty shines within
I know your probably another guys muse
Cause a diamond like you, you just don't lose
The way you smile
Let me daydream if only for awhile
In a little restaurant on the corner of fourth avenue
In a corner booth telling each other sweet I love you's
As I brush aside your falling hair
Slowly guiding it behind your ear
Daydreaming of us in the dark
Slow kissing racing hearts
Lost in love and lost in time
Your lips on mine
Caressing your bottom lip with my thumb
Trembling bodies turning numb
In that moment we are a single whole
Raging hearts and tangled souls
I cut back to reality
To drink my cream and coffee
I wrestle with my doubt
If I should ask her out
If she could only see
The man that's inside of me
She wouldn't have to look anymore
I'm the one she's been looking for
As I sit here with a napkin
Wondering where I should begin
With pen in hand
I hope she understands.................
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5 responses
@Wonderwall79 (116)
• Te Puke, New Zealand
13 Jan 16
Hi there oh thanks I appreciate that , yeah on my viewing it's got breaks and put into verses as a poem should be , I'm not sure how to re edit it my friend
But thanks I will look into now
Thanks for commenting :)
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@jaboUK (64354)
• United Kingdom
13 Jan 16
@Wonderwall79 Now that is SO much better! I hope you didn't mind me saying.
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@Wonderwall79 (116)
• Te Puke, New Zealand
13 Jan 16
@jaboUK no not at all I thank you for the advice I'm just getting use to the keys and the tools :)
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@Wonderwall79 (116)
• Te Puke, New Zealand
13 Feb 16
Yes definitely has :) thanks for commenting :)
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@allknowing (137708)
• India
13 Jan 16
Well written.
Make it real. Don't fantacise
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@Wonderwall79 (116)
• Te Puke, New Zealand
13 Jan 16
Haha yeah thanks for the advice :)
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@Wonderwall79 (116)
• Te Puke, New Zealand
15 Jan 16
Hi Marie
Thank you very much for your kind words and taking the time to read my litte ditties :)
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@Wonderwall79 (116)
• Te Puke, New Zealand
13 Jan 16
Hi thank you I appreciate the kind comments I'm just a weekend hacker really but thank you very much :)
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