Meaningful Poem Challenge

@just4him (317089)
Green Bay, Wisconsin
February 26, 2016 2:03am CST
Poem suggested challenge by @Daljinder. This is a poem I wrote on the first anniversary of 9/11. It's a cry of the heart for what happened that day and for all those who were there and remember those tragic events. I later learned my best friend was supposed to be there that day, but she had a dental emergency that kept her from New York City. God works in mysterious ways. Still this is a chapter in history that will not be soon forgotten. GOD’S TEARS Have you ever thought about God’s Tears? He cried on September 11, 2001 People from every walk of life suddenly sought God For the first time the ACLU took a back seat to prayer We didn’t ask congress if we could pray we just did Why Because it was the day God cried America Land of the free Home of the brave Our freedoms were in question And heroes were born in a day Ordinary people doing extraordinary things Reaching out to people they never knew To defend a God they didn’t know And God cried In New York City, Washington D.C., and a field in Pennsylvania Across our land terrorism now haunts our shores We declared war They declared a holy war Let freedom ring has been our cry But what price-freedom And God cried America is no stranger to battles for freedom We fought before against tyranny Did we forget the lessons of our past? Have we forgotten why we are a nation God protects Why we proclaim freedom and justice for all America has fought many battles, but never for God This is something new America stands for freedom But at what cost And God cried God is the God of the fatherless, and the widow He’s mercy justice and forgiveness all in one Love your neighbor as you love yourself And we did that day We took care of our fellowman We wiped the tears Looked for loved ones Helped on food lines Gave blood We hugged, cried, mourned and said our good-byes And God cried Days and weeks of media coverage Glued to our TV’s and radio’s Looking for answers Newsmen choked on the pictures that words could not describe It wasn’t ‘Goodnight until Tomorrow’ It was ‘We’ll be back tomorrow if God is willing’ The flag unfurled Moments of silence Last words of love Candles in the darkness And God cried God bless America rang out from shore to shore Prayer services Churches were filled Flags were waved Red white and blue was seen everywhere Tee shirts Bumper Stickers Compassion Family Friends Unity And God cried He said He would walk with us through every storm He would dry our tears And calm our fears If we would but call on His name With outstretched arms He welcomed our loved ones home I’m proud to be an American To live where freedom reigns As long as we don’t bow to injustice and tyranny We will always be free And we cried 12 September 2002, Valerie Jean Routhieaux
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@LadyDuck (471498)
• Switzerland
26 Feb 16
I hope that God also cried when millions of people were exterminated in concentration camps, that he cries when children are abused, raped and killed. There is so much sorrow in the world.
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@vandana7 (100300)
• India
26 Feb 16
Yes. He cries I am sure.
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@RasmaSandra (79929)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
29 Feb 16
@just4him Absolutely awesome and emotional poetry. Yes, there were tears from God and the angels.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
26 Feb 16
I'm sure He did.
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@vandana7 (100300)
• India
26 Feb 16
Extremely touching. Yeah the world watched how Americans got together. I remember seeing Tom Cruise up there trying to calm people. I wish our folks would be as nice.
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@vandana7 (100300)
• India
26 Feb 16
@just4him ..Neither would we. It was also a day the world must have learned how citizens ought to behave.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
26 Feb 16
I'll never forget that day.
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@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
26 Feb 16
@vandana True... My heart always do this weird thing that I don't have a name for whenever those images flash through my memories...
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@mammots (3209)
• Philippines
26 Feb 16
Very nice poem. We also cried with God on September 11,2001
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@mammots (3209)
• Philippines
26 Feb 16
@Daljinder The attackers eyes for sure did not shed a single tear on that day.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
26 Feb 16
I was in complete shock.
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@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
26 Feb 16
@mammots There weren't many eyes that didn't shed the tears...
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@yugocean (9963)
• India
27 Feb 16
This poem is for the emotions, however that incident made USA learn a lesson for security, yet the whole world have to learn
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@yugocean (9963)
• India
27 Feb 16
@Daljinder JNU incident and Media's support to anti India element is proving we are in a country where sold people are taking pride
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Feb 16
True. We have stronger and stricter security measures as a result of 9/11.
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@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
27 Feb 16
@yugocean I agree. Our country has not learned a lesson yet... I fear what would finally be the final nail in the coffin...
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@jaboUK (64354)
• United Kingdom
26 Feb 16
This is a wonderful poem Valerie, it gets right to the heart of what everybody felt that day - not just Americans. Thank you @Daljinder for suggesting this to me.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
26 Feb 16
@jaboUK I had a lot of positive feedback with it when I first read it in church and then posted it in a couple places online.
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@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
26 Feb 16
@JaboUk You are welcome... :)
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@Lucky15 (37374)
• Philippines
26 Feb 16
God cried...that day. Nice poem ma'am
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
26 Feb 16
Thank you.
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@Lucky15 (37374)
• Philippines
27 Feb 16
@just4him i remember a poem in rick warren's Purpose driven life with yourpoem too
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Feb 16
@Lucky15 I've read that book.
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@salonga (27775)
• Philippines
26 Feb 16
It was a tragic event in history. Your poem brought back all the memories and I felt like crying.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
26 Feb 16
I got that reaction a lot. Thank you.
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@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
26 Feb 16
@salonga I did too...
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@hexeduser22 (7419)
• Philippines
27 Feb 16
God did cry that day... Americans cried that day... We cried that day...the whole world witnessed the pain, sadness and the terror... A heartfelt poem. Thank you @just4him and thank you @Daljinder for suggesting this
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• Philippines
27 Feb 16
@just4him there will always be conflict and risks in this world of ours. We should always be vigilant and careful. I'm just glad that online community such as mylot exists, at least we get to share things equally without much conflict. It's not utopia but at least we got something here
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Feb 16
Thank you. This is my favorite poem because it has so much meaning for me and what I witnessed daily on my television screen. It was a day that literally changed the way the world does things now. Terrorism is at the heart of everything we think and do it seems. We need to be extra cautious about everything we do and everywhere we go.
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@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
27 Feb 16
@hexeduser22 You are welcome... :)
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@LeaPea2417 (37355)
• Toccoa, Georgia
26 Feb 16
It is very well written and a good tribute to that sad day.
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@LeaPea2417 (37355)
• Toccoa, Georgia
27 Feb 16
@just4him your welcome :)
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
26 Feb 16
Thank you.
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• Midland, Michigan
26 Feb 16
Very nice, Valerie. There is a lot of history here in this free verse poem. I heard some stories back then about believers that did cry out for God's help and made it to safety before the towers collapsed.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
26 Feb 16
So did I and I was grateful for every one that made it out before the towers collapsed.
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@shshiju (10342)
• Cochin, India
26 Feb 16
God is always here .One who seeks him in sadness, difficulties will definitely get his heal touch. God also feels sad for humans cruelty.
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@shshiju (10342)
• Cochin, India
27 Feb 16
@just4him God gives man the selection. The selection to do sin or virtue. He can select his path and the reward.
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@JudyEv (340278)
• Rockingham, Australia
27 Feb 16
This is a lovely poem. September 11 is a day that will live in everyone's memory.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Feb 16
I know I won't forget it. It was a horrific day.
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@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
26 Feb 16
The devastating loss and pain was felt all over the world @just4him. I remember my whole family was glued to the T.V. screen shocked beyond belief. Frozen still not wanting to believe that horror filled pictures we were all seeing.... You so rightly said that words failed to describe those pictures. I am still having trouble finding words describing it... That dark day had shooked the world and still do. It will NEVER be forgotten. I wish and pray to God that it NEVER EVER gets repeated again...... P. S. Although it is meaningless in comparison to the wonderful touching poem you shared, I just wanted to clarify that I didn't start any challenge. I just wanted to know motivational/meaningful quotes and poems... But if you want you can do this challenge.. Maybe make it as your own... Can I request one thing? Please ask whoever participate in it to post their submissions in this very discussion or tag their posts with your title so it is easy to track and read. I always get lost when it comes to challenges and miss out on other peoples submissions... I very much want to see the ones they would post on this one... Thank you...
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
26 Feb 16
I understood it as a challenge. The last challenge I attempted fell flat. So we'll see what happens.
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@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
26 Feb 16
@just4him Okay.. no worries....
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@avi256 (8489)
• Pune, India
26 Feb 16
A very sensitive take on that incident through a very touchy poem. I still pray for those who lost everything that day. That indeed was the black day in the history of mankind for me.
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@divssri (971)
• Bangalore, India
26 Feb 16
So much touching.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Feb 16
Thank you.
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@divssri (971)
• Bangalore, India
27 Feb 16
@just4him you are welcome friend
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• Surrey, British Columbia
27 Feb 16
yeah nice ,wonderful poem .i love it
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Feb 16
Thank you.
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@Juliaacv (51019)
• Canada
26 Feb 16
Although I am not American, I did share many of these feelings. You did a wonderful job on this poem, it says it all.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Feb 16
Thank you very much.
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@GrannyGee (3517)
• Louisburg, North Carolina
26 Feb 16
Just beautiful, and so heart-touching. I love this poem.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Feb 16
Thank you. It's my favorite of all that I've written, which really isn't many as I'm not a poet per se. I write it, but I'm a novelist.
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@GrannyGee (3517)
• Louisburg, North Carolina
27 Feb 16
@just4him I understand ... I write ... but, poems come in my head, also. :)
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@Shiva49 (26690)
• Singapore
26 Feb 16
A moving poem that resonates with the unity that outshone all other fissures in society in the moment of crisis. United we stand, divided we fall was proved once again. Mindless violence has no religion I stopped playing Tennis from that day. I had just returned after few games when I saw these too hard to believe, stomach, images on the screen - siva
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Feb 16
They were hard to believe. It was a shock.
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@trivia79 (7828)
• El Segundo, California
26 Feb 16
i will never forget that date. it's the birthday of my older sister
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Feb 16
That would make it very hard to forget.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
29 Feb 16
@trivia79 That wasn't very nice of you.
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@trivia79 (7828)
• El Segundo, California
29 Feb 16
@just4him i remembered, i made a joke to my sister that she's a bad luck that's why that event happened hehehe
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@mk6195 (65)
• Bilaspur, India
4 Apr 16
I Suck at Poem Writing or Rhyming.... But I do like to Enjoy Good ones..........
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
4 Apr 16
I write them only when the inspiration is there otherwise I stick to novel writing.
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@just4him (317089)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
7 Apr 16
@mk6195 It's a good novel. I've read it a couple times.
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@mk6195 (65)
• Bilaspur, India
7 Apr 16
@just4him me to like to read a lot more then I watch television, The Count of Monte Cristo is the best Novel I have read...
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