Suddendeath poetry Challenge: grumpy!

Centralia, Missouri
May 28, 2016 6:42am CST
Welcome to this weekend’s Suddendeath poetry challenge, grumpy! Anyways, rules are as follows, write a poem in any style using the five words that I give you. Write it in one sitting or in under an hour (only to quash your inner editor, rules are loose there). Add it here, OR link in a comment so we can enjoy each other’s poems. The words can be in any plurality or tense. Today’s words are sad, blue, rough, tired, low. My entry is below: ------------------------------------------------------- So much effort gone and lost, because of a morning grump Sorry I took my mood out on you, I feel like such a chump. Sad I have been, as I watched things break without knowing how to fix Doesn’t help when morning grumpies I stupidly threw in the mix. Blue do I feel but not the kind that’s calm, oh no this is low. Despite my rude morning words, I do love you you know. I didn’t sleep well and had a rough night and needed my cup of tea, and I’m sorry that my tired, silly little self was grumpy you see!
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@trivia79 (7828)
• El Segundo, California
28 May 16
nice poem.
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• Centralia, Missouri
29 May 16
why thank you, I dont feel like todays I really had much heart in sadly, was an off week for me. Still glad someone enjoyed!
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@trivia79 (7828)
• El Segundo, California
31 May 16
@Jessicalynnt no worries! i just enjoyed every poem with rhyming words at the end
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@Drosophila (16571)
• Ireland
28 May 16
sad, blue, rough, tired, low. I heard from the grapevine you have been feeling so sad 'n' blue, You know what gossips are like, never know if it's really bad or true. It has been months since I've been laying low, I'm tired of the rough nights, that you surely know. It's been months since we've talked, I did both of us a favor and walked. I don't know what more you can expect from me. I'm sure as hell ain't gonna hang around and see!
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@1hopefulman (45120)
• Canada
28 May 16
Here is my contribution I had a girl that made me glad Then she left me and I felt sad That has happened with a few When they left I’ve been blue You’d think by now I’d be tough But I just hate being treated rough You’d think by now that I’d be tired But without a girl I’m not inspired So whenever I’m left feeling low I turn to God above and I’m aglow
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• Preston, England
30 May 16
sounds a great apologetic poem
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• Preston, England
31 May 16
@Jessicalynnt best time to grump when no one hears it
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• Centralia, Missouri
1 Jun 16
@arthurchappell I was rather happy when he told me that
• Centralia, Missouri
31 May 16
thanks, funny thing was, he didnt even remember me grumping! he was half asleep himself
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@Tampa_girl7 (50179)
• United States
30 May 16
Sorry that I don't have time to participate in this one
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• Centralia, Missouri
30 May 16
it's ok! It was a lackluster list at best, but JJ did a great job with it, mine was kinda meh I think
• Budennovsk, Russian Federation
4 Jun 16
Hohoho! -Are you tired? -Yes, a bit. I was fired. -Holy sh*t! Was Chef rough? Or were you lazy? Tell me stuff, And don't be crazy! -In the morning Chef was sad. Friends gave warning: "Boss is mad!" Low net profit Was the cause. I drank coffee, Took a pause. Boss came in, I was relaxing. "That's so blue!" He said while faxing. "You have time For proper rest! Ah, you swine!" He shouted stressed. "You are fired, Lazy person!" So i'm tired. My mood worsened.
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• Centralia, Missouri
4 Jun 16
Oh that is a lovely story, fun format
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