Giving Up
@merliva13 (47)
Castries, Saint Lucia
May 28, 2016 12:08pm CST
Am goanna do me
Am goanna be me
Am goanna be who urll all can see
Am goanna be this lone a ,hiding like am in a comer
Getting away from all the drummer ,cause that’s just me
a loser ,listening to urll saying shate like whose goanna choose her,woos her,
acting like am drug user ,sometimes I wish I was just as storong as a cruiser
so I wont brother hearing lets accuse her, abuse her, confuse her,
so why not just give up and be a loser
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@kaylachan (71771)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
28 May 16
This poem is really good. If it is based on how you're feeling then you should find someone to talk to.
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@merliva13 (47)
• Castries, Saint Lucia
28 May 16
lol i feel my self deh thanks a lot doe ,thats what i do i love writing poems its like a hobby and yh thats how i feel
@kaylachan (71771)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
28 May 16
@merliva13 I'm sorry to hear that . I'm glad you found an outlet and I hope you feel better. Message me here if you think taliking it out will help.
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@merliva13 (47)
• Castries, Saint Lucia
28 May 16
@kaylachan sure i will ,and thanks for helping out
