Let's try our hands at writing a poem.Whats say?

India
May 30, 2016 5:42am CST
I wanted to post something and didn't know what to post so I tried to write a poem and the end result is here. This silence, its everywhere Moon is hiding,night is darkest And Nothing is left in here Bitterness building in my chest Maybe tonight raindrops will fall like tiny pieces of my dreams In this darkness when I call Hear only echoes of my screams Been lonely for so many years That solitude is my only friend My eyes carrying weight of tears Its all my mistake in the end Rain is now pouring all over the place Is it tears or is it rain? Washing away wet trails off my face Only penace can wipe my pain
2 responses
@miniam (9154)
• Bern, Switzerland
30 May 16
im not creative so count me out.
• India
30 May 16
Even I am not creative.I just made wrote some words that rhymes.
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@miniam (9154)
• Bern, Switzerland
30 May 16
@jerry260188 Im not even going to try.
• Philippines
30 May 16
What a nice poem.
• India
30 May 16
Thanks it was my first attempt.