A short poem from my collection

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@sofssu (23662)

July 5, 2016 5:43am CST

Cleansing of the soul Unspoken words, Unexpressed sentiments, Pent up emotions, Rise up, Seeking release, In a torrent of words. The soul articulates itself, In flowing tears, Unrestrained, Until cleansed, Of shame and guilt, Pain and loss, And truth prevails, In the sanctuary of the mind. Light filters in, The day dawns, Into the splendor of light, The soul moves on, With life! From time to time all of us need some soul cleansing.. This was written on one such occasion. Does it make sense to you?

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@salonga (27775)

• Philippines

5 Jul 16

I love this! This is so meaningful! Indeed we need soul cleansing from time to time.

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@salonga (27775)

• Philippines

5 Jul 16

@sofssu Yes, that exactly makes the poem meaningful enough.

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@salonga (27775)

• Philippines

6 Jul 16

@salonga And your flower photo, I love it so!

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@sofssu (23662)

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5 Jul 16

@salonga Its not just about the pain and disappointments in life its but also about sin and repentance. I know you understand that from that aspect too.

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@cacay1 (83577)

• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines

5 Jul 16

Nice poem, full of realities of life.

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@sofssu (23662)

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5 Jul 16

@cacay1 Thank you..I am glad you think so.

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@sofssu (23662)

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6 Jul 16

@cacay1 Thank you so much my dear.

@cacay1 (83577)

• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines

5 Jul 16

@sofssu Yes, that's my imagery to your poem.

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@skysnap (20153)

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5 Jul 16

Your writing is good. I am sure you would have many followers on wattpad.

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@skysnap (20153)

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5 Jul 16

@cacay1 yes with name "spiraltales".

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@sofssu (23662)

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5 Jul 16

@skysnap Thank you sweetie you told me that before. I appreciate that so much.

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@cacay1 (83577)

• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines

5 Jul 16

@skysnap, are you also there at wattpad?

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@jaboUK (64354)

• United Kingdom

5 Jul 16

Yes, it makes sense and it's beautiful.

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@sofssu (23662)

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5 Jul 16

@jaboUK Thank you very much.. I am glad you think so..

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@ridingbet (66854)

• Philippines

5 Jul 16

it does. it is a random expression of your emotions and your soul

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@sofssu (23662)

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5 Jul 16

@ridingbet I wouldn't say its a random expression of emotions.. it is a very well documented and proved tool to cleanse the soul and bring forth healing.

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@cacay1 (83577)

• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines

5 Jul 16

That is true.

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@Bector (127)

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5 Jul 16

you write so good !!. I cant stop reading this again and again as if it is written for me only or for all those broken hearts :( greetings from india , keep writing like this only its really good. touched my heart as well :')

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@sofssu (23662)

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5 Jul 16

@Bector I am glad you liked it.. sorry that your heart is broken.. but then those tears cleanse the soul can cause healing to sporing forth. Take care.

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@epiffanie (11326)

• Australia

6 Jul 16

Beautiful! Yes it does make sense to me.. I have been doing some soul cleansing as I go through life .. especially this past couple of years ..

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@sofssu (23662)

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6 Jul 16

@epiffanie I bet all of us have some dirt there to be cleansed on a regular basis. The more we do it the happier we are.

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@sofssu (23662)

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7 Jul 16

@epiffanie LOL oh no.. we don't have to wait for that.. You had me laughing on this one.

@Jessicalynnt (50523)

• Centralia, Missouri

5 Jul 16

things bottled up will come out, and not always under control if they are under too much pressure

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@sofssu (23662)

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6 Jul 16

@Jessicalynnt Why let so much pressure build up.. let off steam every day.

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@crazyhorseladycx (39509)

• United States

5 Jul 16

yes ma'am, makes perfect sense to me, well written :)

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@sofssu (23662)

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6 Jul 16

@crazyhorseladycx Thank you lady.. I guess not too many enjoy reading serious poetry and such here. As far as I can see.

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@sofssu (23662)

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6 Jul 16

@crazyhorseladycx That is so sweet of you.. fifteen times .. OMG thank you much.

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@crazyhorseladycx (39509)

• United States

6 Jul 16

@sofssu yer most welcome. 'tis a shame that folks aint more into the "arts" here, perhaps they fear broadenin' their minds? schtuff that requires deep thought'n reflection outside 'f their realm? i dunno, i've read't 'bout 15 times now 'n find more 'layers' with each read. big hugs!!

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@sol_cee (38219)

• Philippines

5 Jul 16

Lovely woven words.

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@sofssu (23662)

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5 Jul 16

@sol_cee Thank you.. I appreciate that.

@Lucky15 (37374)

• Philippines

6 Jul 16

This is a sure reminder. Thanks ;)

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@sofssu (23662)

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6 Jul 16

@Lucky15 Thanks for reading and responding to it.

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@Shiva49 (26762)

• Singapore

6 Jul 16

Good poem. Our soul needs cleansing through release of our pent up emotions - siva

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@sofssu (23662)

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6 Jul 16

@Shiva49 Yeah it needs cleaning day after day because we are not perfect... Thank you for spending time reading it.

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5 Jul 16

good words

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@sofssu (23662)

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5 Jul 16

@krkumar Thank you.

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@kitteninarms (35)

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5 Jul 16

Sounds weird........

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@sofssu (23662)

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5 Jul 16

@kitteninarms What about this sounds weird to you.. Maybe your opinion will help look at it from another angle.

@SIMPLYD (90721)

• Philippines

8 Jul 16

The poet in you , it's nice . So full of emotions .

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@shubhu3 (36463)

• New Delhi, India

9 Jul 16

Yeah it does. And hats off to your talent. This poem is extremely beautiful. :)