There Was Old Maid From Kansas City / myLot

Garden Grove, California

July 18, 2016 3:01pm CST

There was an old maid from Kansas City who had not one ounce of pity S he got angry, bit her maid' Because she laid down i n the shade. "You wicked old lady:"went the ditty' If you knew a gnu'' Was not a kangaroo What would you then do? Why Id go see a zoo. One silly li merick and poem original b y P Hatley copyrighted 2016

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DianneN

@DianneN (247186)

• United States

18 Jul 16

Cute job!

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Patsie Hatley

@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

18 Jul 16

thanks I keep trying so maybe I w ill get much better ll

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DianneN

@DianneN (247186)

• United States

18 Jul 16

@Hatley You're doing just fine!

dbherald

@dbherald (491)

• India

18 Jul 16

Good combination of words, like it.

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Patsie Hatley

@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

18 Jul 16

thanks guess Im getting better learning how lol

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Judy Story

@jstory07 (139976)

• Roseburg, Oregon

18 Jul 16

Another cute poem that you wrote. i do better with my rhyming stories. Maybe I can think of another one today.

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Patsie Hatley

@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

18 Jul 16

I really enjoyed your rhyming stories do some more please lol

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Judy Story

@jstory07 (139976)

• Roseburg, Oregon

18 Jul 16

@Hatley If I can think of one.

Jekca

@Jessicalynnt (50523)

• Centralia, Missouri

18 Jul 16

lol off biting maids

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Patsie Hatley

@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

18 Jul 16

hi I had fun thinking and envisioning t lol

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Gary Marsh

@garymarsh6 (23404)

• United Kingdom

18 Jul 16

There was a nice lady from Garden grove. She wanted to drive instead I drove. She was mightily witty and wrote several ditties They are like a little treasure trove! Keep them coming Patsy!