Poetry/feelings

@detion (197)
August 4, 2016 4:53pm CST
A friend of mine is very talented in writing! He always expresses his feelings through poetry. He is not famous, but I really admire his works! He doesn't consider himself a poet, but I really hope that one day he will be awarded. I hope you will enjoy it as much as I do! My gray soul, Dead. Their voices buried my dead soul Tapped it nicely and squarely It had become gray and dull Never as soul it was happy Now the silence wants it up To mock with it, to play And in silence knocks and taps To enjoy its colour, gray. But my soul tucked away Who knows in what Dante's circle Yet it's colour it still gray Unknown from when, what cycle. Standing back at the doorbell Silence shouts and screams No answer from heaven or hell My gray soul remains unseen
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@JustBhem (70555)
• Davao, Philippines
5 Aug 16
Wow. He has potential to be a poet. A good writer is very good in words and a poet.
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@JustBhem (70555)
• Davao, Philippines
5 Aug 16
@detion Yes. Why don't you invite him here.
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@detion (197)
6 Aug 16
@JustBhem I'll think about!
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@detion (197)
5 Aug 16
I am glad that you agree with me!
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@sol_cee (38219)
• Philippines
4 Aug 16
Why not invite him here?
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@detion (197)
5 Aug 16
I will consider your idea!
@sol_cee (38219)
• Philippines
5 Aug 16
@detion sure.
@ridingbet (66854)
• Philippines
5 Aug 16
nice poem.
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@detion (197)
5 Aug 16
really nice!