Sudden Death Challenge : lost,adrift,bitter, low and need.

By Patsie Hatley

@Hatley (163776)

Garden Grove, California

August 27, 2016 2:14pm CST

Really I'm adrift in a sea and lost How low can I get,how bitter my need You left, no words so I'm tempus tossed Love does not act like that, you heed? I grew up,not low no need Bitter not new love I'm freed No longer adrift on a wild sea I am now free,free to be me One original challenge poem, graphic by P Hatley copyrighted 2016

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6 responses

@Jessicalynnt (50523)

• Centralia, Missouri

27 Aug 16

Love the last few lines, great job with these words!

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@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

28 Aug 16

thanks they were fun to do making sure they made sense and doing it quickly

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@CinnamonGrl (7086)

• Santa Fe, New Mexico

27 Aug 16

Very nice. To heck with whoever they are lol

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@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

28 Aug 16

he he all fiction not about me but just thinking of a friend whose fiance left her and how she would feel as she found a man that was just right for her and they are going to get married.

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@vandana7 (100546)

• India

27 Aug 16

I liked the poem, especially the last line..hugs.

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@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

27 Aug 16

thanks I had fun trying to use the words given and it did come together loll

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Belle Starr (Iz)

@BelleStarr (61102)

• United States

28 Aug 16

You did a great job using the challenge words Well done.

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@jstory07 (139817)

• Roseburg, Oregon

28 Aug 16

You did really good with that challenge. I will have to try it.

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@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

28 Aug 16

yes its such great fun and a challenge too

@Naryas (160)

• India

27 Aug 16

Nice. Kinda feeling the same

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@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

28 Aug 16

the poem really is not about me but a fictitious woman instead

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