Bubble Bath (A Poem)

@zebra2222 (5268)
United States
September 29, 2016 10:29pm CST
Rubber ducky in hand. Bubbles aplenty. Time for my bath. Don't forget Teddy. And a little toy boat That I love to float. It has a special passenger, A gray billy goat. Bubbles, bubbles in my hair. Lots of fun. Time to share. Laughing, singing, Bubbles delight. This is the way To say Good Night.
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rebelann1949
@rebelann (112874)
• El Paso, Texas
30 Sep 16
that was really funny, is it like a limerick? I should ask @jabouk or @asylum as they'd know for sure.
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Jabo
@jaboUK (64354)
• United Kingdom
30 Sep 16
No, it's not a limerick. They have five lines per stanza
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rebelann1949
@rebelann (112874)
• El Paso, Texas
30 Sep 16
Oh dang @jaboUK I forgot. Silly me
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Inlemay
@Inlemay (17713)
• South Africa
30 Sep 16
As long as there were no new bubbles in the bath
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Toreo
@victorymutt (11)
• Dallas, Texas
30 Sep 16
Fun poem! My suggestion would be to remove most of the periods. They bring the reader to a full stop, which you don't need as much of in poetry, since the line endings do some of that for you. Sorry if that's over-explaining!
Anna
@LadyDuck (471498)
• Switzerland
30 Sep 16
Cute poem. I also love to take a bath in the evening before going to sleep. It's relaxing.
Jabo
@jaboUK (64354)
• United Kingdom
30 Sep 16
Fun poem, a bubble bath is a great way to end the day