Please critique my latest video :)

I watched the first few minutes of your video and I can say that it's pretty dull. I think it would be better if you put your face as well while you are playing it to show your expressions and make your dialogue more interesting and funnier and make sure you pronounce the words clearly. Make sure you also stay on topic and give a bit of overview of what you are playing or doing and also why you are playing it. I think it would be more beneficial if you watch Pewdiepie, that guy is just ridiculous. Cheers!