Haiku 5th November 2016

photo taken by Andy N - me performing poetry
Preston, England
November 5, 2016 2:20pm CST
1/. Next bucket list wish Finishing this Haiku off Oops too late this ti…. 2/. Volcano feelings Erupting anger within Must I go to school? 3/. Red danger warning sign Silences conversation As I approach friends 4/. What if the Moon popped Like a balloon when Armstrong Pricked it with his flag? 5/. Caught on his first stab The serial killer cries Let me try again. Arthur Chappell
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@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
5 Nov 16
ytou rare so good I have a n awful time getting the ines right yours make me smile lol
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@crossbones27 (49722)
• Mojave, California
5 Nov 16
I always love these because it makes you want to read them 20 times to see what they mean.
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• Preston, England
5 Nov 16
they can get very cryptic and multi-meaning
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• Mojave, California
5 Nov 16
@arthurchappell Why I get mad at people who always want lengthy posts and probably my reason why I love punk music so much. When done right you can put a lot of punch in a few words. That is a challenge in itself!
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• Preston, England
5 Nov 16
yes why call a horse a horse when you can call it an equine quadrapedal mammal @crossbones27
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
7 Nov 16
that first one, haha! funny!
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@RasmaSandra (80784)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
5 Nov 16
Enjoyed your haikus. This might not be a haiku but let's see - voting time is near, grab all who are dear, run and hide for the time you fear is now here.
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• Preston, England
6 Nov 16
@RasmaSandra though the rhyming means it isn't haiku it is a fine line of verse in its own right
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