I write poems sometimes. Need constructive criticism and opinions. Thank you!

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My tambourine man Deal me some sleep As I grasp for air Grasp for a glimpse Never thought I can Fall in love this deep It's a song in the wind Soft bells when it rains Sweet smell of a rose All trapped in one dose Deal me a kiss for two Deal me a touch of you Piece me some bits of heart Sweet rays of light and dark Cocaine kiss my scars Lift me to reach the stars Cover me with your sky Kiss me a lullaby I'll throw myself in the depths It all connects Happy little madness Walk me through darkness Smoke away my fear Every time you're here Tambourine man I love yours As you love mine