Suggest a title please?

December 29, 2016 7:45am CST
The sky is a mirror, glass and colossal The moon is the face of my beloved. Priya.
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LaJenna
@LaJenna (167)
• United States
29 Dec 16
Eternal Love
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Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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29 Dec 16
@LaJenna Wow... A good one!
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Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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30 Dec 16
@LaJenna Sure I will!
LaJenna
@LaJenna (167)
• United States
30 Dec 16
@The_Bong_Woman Let us know which one you like the best.
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Avinash
@avi256 (8489)
• Pune, India
29 Dec 16
Skylark
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Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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29 Dec 16
@avi256 Skylark? Interesting... What made you come up with this?
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Avinash
@avi256 (8489)
• Pune, India
29 Dec 16
@The_Bong_Woman Nothing too philosophical though... There is Hotel near my place and suddenly when I read your poem, it came to my mind..skylark
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Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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29 Dec 16
@avi256 Oh okay. Anyways thanks for suggesting!
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Arthur Chappell
@arthurchappell (44998)
• Preston, England
29 Dec 16
nice poem - Reflections might be a good title
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Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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29 Dec 16
@arthurchappell Reflections indeed! Thank you!
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Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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30 Dec 16
I have come up with the title. Do check my new post. Thank you!
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Anna
@LadyDuck (471253)
• Switzerland
30 Dec 16
Nice poem, Reflections is a good title.
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Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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30 Dec 16
@LadyDuck Thank you! I appreciate it.
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LaJenna
@LaJenna (167)
• United States
30 Dec 16
This is a great poem! Have you ever written a Haiku poem? 5 syllables first line, 7 for the second line, and then 5 again for the 3rd line. These usually come out great. Then I always add a reflection afterward.
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Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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30 Dec 16
I have written haiku... But not in the traditional way though. Mine are more of two liners.
VJ
@Magicweaver1 (343)
• New Delhi, India
29 Dec 16
It's like one heart telling the other in the silence of harmony. ... How alike are we and even the distance between us can make no difference.... I am still you and you are still me.... Your post has left an air of romance in the mood Priya.... Thanks a lot for sharing this.... Keep shining and let the word shine back at you.... Happiness to you always.... :)
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Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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29 Dec 16
@Magicweaver1 Wow VJ you have interpreted those lines so wonderfully! I will let you in on a secret, most of the things I write come to me simultaneously so that when I am done jotting them down, I find myself lacking words to explain or interpret what exactly I have written down. But you did it so seamlessly. Thank you for going through my post. You touched the very nerve of it! Thanks again.
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Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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30 Dec 16
@Magicweaver1 Thank you so much!
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VJ
@Magicweaver1 (343)
• New Delhi, India
29 Dec 16
@The_Bong_Woman what the picture dipicted was deep but what you wrote was even deeper Priya....You wrote it real well dear.... It just hit right in....and I promise the secret you shared will remain between the two of us ;).... While this was my first time for reading your posts, I will be around looking forward to reading many more posts from you.... Keep shining, writing and sharing dear...Happiness to you always.... :)
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