Haiku Saturday 31st December 2016

me with the gulls - taken by Carl Dyer
Preston, England
December 31, 2016 11:53am CST
1/. Resolution time Never make one to ensure That I can’t break them 2/. New Year graft on old Invisible tissue scars Between last and first 3/. Two Haiku share theme Right next to one another I’m losing my touch. 4/. So quiet at dawn Wonder if last man on Earth See dog walker – damn! 5/. Gulls claim village green Stare as if I’d steal their worms Spaghetti instead. Arthur Chappell
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@celticeagle (168334)
• Boise, Idaho
1 Jan 17
Interesting. Especially the "See dog walker-damn!" Curious on that one.
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• Midland, Michigan
1 Jan 17
I'm guessing his expletive was because the dog walker he saw changed his idea that he was the last man on earth at that moment in time.
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@celticeagle (168334)
• Boise, Idaho
1 Jan 17
@MarshaMusselman ......Really? Where would you come up with such an idea?
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• Preston, England
2 Jan 17
@celticeagle @MarshaMusselman has it right, thinking of films like day Of The Triffids and 28 Days Later where someone finds everyone else seems to have vanished until he eventually meets other survivors - the last word suggests disappointment that nothing has changed after all
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@snowy22315 (182240)
• United States
15 Jan 17
I would write a Haiku poem in response, but I don't feel like thinking that much at the moment!
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@snowy22315 (182240)
• United States
15 Jan 17
@arthurchappell I am OK..for now. Thanks!!!! I just didn't feel like thinking..
• Preston, England
15 Jan 17
@snowy22315 hope you are feeling ok, haiku writing can wait until you are in the mood
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@crossbones27 (49721)
• Mojave, California
31 Dec 16
Well done, You are like me. I also never makes New Years resolutions for that specific reason. Silly thing anyway if you ask me, but maybe I am just a grump.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
1 Jan 17
eww, worm food! honestly I loved the play in 1-3!
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• Midland, Michigan
1 Jan 17
Nice way to share a snippet of your life in haiku, Arthur. Are those the gulls you reference in the one stanza? Lol. I see them enjoying spaghetti more than worms unless they are gummy worms maybe. Our sea gulls don't bother with worms, but rather eat all the litter that people throw about parking lots. It looks like you must have an amusement part set up throughout each year there?
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• Preston, England
2 Jan 17
@MarshaMusselman not the same gulls fortunately - they were in a parade I was watching so I grabbed the photo opportunity as it isn't something seen every day
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@Happy2BeMe (99380)
• Canada
31 Dec 16
Great job as always
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@garymarsh6 (23404)
• United Kingdom
31 Dec 16
I am like you Never make them that way you can't break them! Happy New Year to you!
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@rina110383 (24492)
1 Jan 17
Excellently written haiku!
31 Dec 16
I have to say that I'm really enjoying this kind of haiku.
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