The Moment.
By Priya
@The_Bong_Woman (850)
January 3, 2017 6:36am CST
You caught me unawares
You came when I was totally disarmed.
I expected you across a railway platform
Or perhaps walking barefoot
On a smooth sand beach,
Your eyes linked with mine
In a moment we are complete,
This is what I thought
Or more like dreamed,
But no
You came when I least expected,
When my person was but engaged
With the trivia of everyday life,
When I was feeling the least romantic
When it was nowhere near sunny
But was raining,
When no wind played with my hair
Nor did I feel the urge to be in someone's arms;
I was just me,
Messed up, tired, suffering of normalcy
No excitement nothing,
That's when you came
Like a fresh breath of wind,
Unto an unsuspecting land.
You caught me unawares
You came when I was totally disarmed.
The moment never did
But you still came.
Priyashna.
Photo credit- Pinterest.
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5 responses
@MALUSE (69373)
• Germany
3 Jan 17
@The_Bong_Woman How can a non-Indian member know that?
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@rishav_jaiswal (73)
• Dhanbad, India
4 Jan 17
Wow nyc romantic poem.
It put smile on my face and my girl's face in my mind.
Can I dedicate this poem to her??
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@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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4 Jan 17
@rishav_jaiswal Haha sure go ahead. Thank you by the way for appreciating my poem. 
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@rishav_jaiswal (73)
• Dhanbad, India
4 Jan 17
@The_Bong_Woman hahaha she liked it very much...she got a bit emotional too .
Thank you very much.U r very talented.keep up the good work.
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Thank you very much.U r very talented.keep up the good work.
@AliCanary (3212)
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4 Jan 17
Oh, I love this! Fate is often completely unplanned-for, and this captures that perfectly. I love the musing way in which it is written.
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@The_Bong_Woman (850)
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5 Jan 17
Thank you so much. I absolutely agree with you when you say fate is something which takes us by surprise; not something we can anticipate. Besides, we all fantasize about finding our other half in a particular way but about that too we can never be certain.
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